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Shetland Sheepdog

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The First Thaw


Ok as you guys know I started a FF on the NKC. I'll post the first 3 chapters I had before and then I will post 4 tomorrow or Saturday! Please don't post yet. I am going to make a few edit spaces. And try to find out how to edit XD

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~Newest Chapters~Chapter 3NORMA! Atka called out over and over, very excitedly.Yes, dear, Im coming, Norma panted, as she hopped her way up.Look! Whats in that chest? Atka questioned.Well, I dont know. Lets try and find out! So the two looked at the chest and tried to figure out how to get it open.Hmm this might take all day. Maybe a week! Norma said.Wait. Do you think we should look under the chest? There might be something under it. Atka replied.RYAN! Come up here please! Norma shouted as Atka was startled from her big voice.Yeah, Honey? Ryan yelled back. Ryan was all black with one white spot under his eye. He was very athletic and kind to everyone. Ryan only got mean when necessary. Oh so you must be Atka! Well, nice to meet you He said with a Southern accent.Nice to meet you too, Ryan Atka replied politely.So what is it youve got here? Oh never mind.Yup! We need help moving this. Maybe youve got a big guest thats strong? Atka asked.Ha ha. Well, our biggest visitor is another wolf. Norma told her.Do you think you could get him?Oh sure! And Norma hopped right down that hole. Atka and Ryan were quiet until they heard the echoing footsteps from the hole. They got closer and closer until the two animals could see the others.OH MY GOD. Is that..? LUKAS?!?!?!?!?!?! OH MY GOD LUKAS IVE FINALLY FOUND YOU! Atka exploded with joy and kissed her older brother in tears.Atka..? OH MY GOSH! Its really you! Ive been looking all over for you! I thought you died. Well, at least were back together now! Lukas said tears of joy pouring from his eyes.Tune in for chapter 4!

-- Edited by GOLDENRETRIEVERLOVER at 18:35, 2007-05-04

-- Edited by GOLDENRETRIEVERLOVER at 18:41, 2007-05-04

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Edit 2
Previous chapters

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Edit 3
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Now you may post! ^__^

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I can't wait CCD! aww

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No. I'm CCDUM >=( Thanks CCD! =D

Can someone tell me why the 2nd post (neweset chapter) isn't showing up how I put it in? And I'm using the advanced editor. ;)

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