Jake's Big Adventure...SHOULD I QUIT WRIGHTING?

Dogluver6578 · Chihuahua

Jake's Big Adventure!!!

Animal_Lover · Golden Retriever

sorry, I was swimming, then took a shower, THEN watched T.V... well, THANX GUYS!!! here's Chapter 2!

Chapter 2.
On one hand, they went to thier "Den" and went to sleep. Jake was fassttt, fast asleep, being only one day old, and all. On the other hand, Shiloh was out to watch, he gave up his whole Clan to be with Jewel. "Jewel!!?!??" "Yes?" She said weakly and tiredly."Get out!!! and get Jake out NOW!!!!" A Rival clan called the "Lafari" was there! (no animal ate each other FROM THIS place, and these wolves wern't. Neither were they.) Jewel quikly grabbed Jake, and ran out.(Wyatt's color is brown) Wyatt, the leader yelled: "Get her!" "NOOOOO!!!!"
they attacked her and... Jewel died. The little pup crawled under her, and dug a hole. Just before he left, he said "Muh- Mamma... :(" with a tear in his eye. He dug so long, it was 8ft. long! "Get him too!" "NO!!!!!!" but he was too late. Foranately, it was just to small for any of them to get in. They left. When Jake came out, nobody was there. And that's the end of Chapter 2.

lol...

-- Edited by winkydoodles at 21:09, 2007-05-27

IWN · Siberian Husky

Is this based on my Jake? =o
Just kidding. XD

Good job though. :)

WoofMeowPal · Dalmation

great job!

Animal_Lover · Golden Retriever

THANK!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....*gasp!!!!!!!!* it's IWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x infinity!!!!!! YOU TRULY ROCK! ( do u have NDogs yet?)

IWN · Siberian Husky

winkydoodles wrote:

THANK!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....*gasp!!!!!!!!* it's IWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x infinity!!!!!! YOU TRULY ROCK! ( do u have NDogs yet?)

o.o
Uhh, thanks?

And yeah, I've had Nintendogs for over a year.

Nintendogsgal54 · Flyer-Fan Admin

Nice work. ^_^

Animal_Lover · Golden Retriever

grasious! (oh, and IWN, ur wellcome!) Chapter 3, at 9:00 PM...mabye. Mabye tomarrow. I'll try. It'll be exsiting!!!!!!

Animal_Lover · Golden Retriever

It's tommarow, and I'm gonna write chapter 3!

Chapter 3.
Jake was very cunfused. His mother died, his father is gone, and nobody else was there. All Jake could do was go back to the den, waiting for his mother, who would never come. Two days later,(He could talk) after having no milk or food, like he could have any, he heard a "meow"... "meeeoww"..." Hello? anyone in there?" "y...yes... who are yuh...you?" " My name is Winky, the one eyed wonder... or that's what my owner calls me..."
"Oh... why are you called the one eyed wonder??? What ARE you??!!?" "I'm called the one eyed wonder, because..." She slowly walked in... "Oh... I see...How did that happen???" "...My...Fater...
So, anyways, I'm a cat. What are you?" "I...I...I don't know...But I think I'm a dog..." Winky stood back a bit. "Oh.......I think my owner told me not to be around dogs... or wolves...or tomcats...or anything bigger than me" "OH!!! But I'm MUCH smaller than you! I'll try not to grow!!!" Winky giggled "You can't stop growwing!
That's HALARIOUS!!!Hey! My owner said something about huskies...Are you a HUSKY??!?"...
"I told you! I don't know! Why do you ask?" "Because that's ... MY OWNERS ABSOLUTE FAVORITE DOG!!!!!" "Wow...I think my mom said I was...was a HUSKY!!... But i don't have a mom...anymore..."
"I can be your mom!" In Genisis, even if you wern't from there, if you were female (animal of course), then you could produse milk, so you can adopt baby animals! "You can't! your not a husky!" Winky grinned as if to say: oh, yes i can! "Oh, yes I can!!" "How?" Winky exsplaind how, and now was his mother. And that's the end of Chapter 3.

Hamtaro76 · Siberian Husky

nice