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thanks! (winky's my kitten, but in this she's a cat.)

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hello? anybody??

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nice story

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Very cute. :P

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THANKS!

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chapter 4 soon! (can u guys help me advertise my story?)

-- Edited by winkydoodles at 18:51, 2007-05-21

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No advertising. =P

And your welcome. ^_^

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oh. okay, well here's Chapter 4!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 4.
Winky fed Jake, and took care of him till he was 4 months old. Winky felt as if she should go back to her owner. So, that day...

"Jake???" "Yeah, Wink?" "I...I feel like I should go back to my owner..." "Huh? Why??? We've known each other...so...long...*sigh*" Winky, well winked. (even though she closed one eye.)"You know... You can ALWAYS come with me..." "REALLY??!?!?!?!!??" "YES!" Winky smiled as they left far east to Amarica. Three days later, Jake was tired, so Winky found a cave to stay at. In the morning...

Jake slowly woke up at 6:00, trying not to wake Winky. He crawled out, and streched.Suddenly, out of the blue... "Hello? Anyone there? WHO'S IN MY DEN!!??!?" "Me...And my...foster mom...Winky..." "Who are you? WHAT are you....." "I'm Jake, a wolf husky mix... My foster mom is a cat, Winky..." It was pitch black, but they could see just a little. "Come with me, --" "WAIT! who are you? and what?" "oh... I'm a husky wolf mix too... WIERD huh? My name is Star.This seems like it always happens in stories...*looks at you*" "Oh...okay then, I'll come with you..." At 6:47, they were on a ledge. They watched the sun came up. It was WONDERFUL, thought Jake. Meanwhile, in the den...

"*yawwwn*... Hey Jake? can you get breakfast?.....Jake? Where are you?" "Stop hiding, Jake!" Of course, Jake didn't answer, Winky cried, scared that her little pup had been killed. Star and Jake howled at the...well, sun. They heard a howl back... "That's My real mom! I know it!!! I'd reconize it anywhere!" Star just stared at him sadly... "Why aren't you with your mom?" Jake looked over, and saw her Beautiful face. He couldn't help but blush, yet still being a little sad."Well, you see, she died......" He told her the story. "Wow. That's sad..." Lemme take you to my den, that you've been staying in." They went back, pretty red. Winky REJOISED! She met Star, and soon Star said...
"Come on, I want you to meet my family, they're in the very back of the cave."She introdused her mother and father, and her big brother, Mike. "Mom? Dad? Can they stay with us??? you see....."
She told them the story, also. They agreed, Jake and Winky can stay. Hannah, Star's mother, comforted Jake, after hearing the story and all. Winky really thought Jake had found a family, She looked sad though, becuase now she would have to leave. She looked a Jake sleeping with Hannah, and Mark, Star's dad. She slowly walked away, with her tail drooping to the ground. She told Jake the way to Her house and left, but before she did, she teased Jake about liking Star.
"I love you, Jake. Please visit me soon..."Then she ran to her home.
"Where's Winky?" "Yeah! I thought she was taking care of you now!"
"Mom??!?!?! Where are you?" He saw a ghost. A ghost that looked like his mom. "MOM!!!!!!!!!!! I missed you so much! where have you been?" "Uhhh... Somewhere...up there..." "Up where? I'll try to visit you if I can!"
She just smiled, and pointed up.
"That way... You'll just have to wait to see me. :)"... "Muh-M-Momma!!!!!!!" "Don't leave!!!" "Don't worry, my dear, I'll visit... ;)" "MOM!!! NO!!!!!...*sigh*, she's...gone."
And that's the end of Chapter 4.!aww

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Nice story ^-^

-- Edited by Missy at 12:15, 2007-05-09

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good job

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