Interesting story. But you should really write it all at once, or at lease write more than what you do at a time. And people shouldn't have to request for you to post it. That's dumb.
I think what I put is just fine. It's a good amount. And I think about how long I make it. And I can Make it seprate if I want. OK? Stop saying mean stuff. >_> GOSH.
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I wasn't saying mean stuff. I just think it would be better and you would have more readers. Why are you so mean? You always complain about how mean other people are, but you're just like them.
winkydoodles, its ok, he was just suggesting how you could make your story better. ;) People sometimes tell me that, so I listen to them, and now people like my stories more, and i dont think you should have put that spoiler thing there. even though we choose to click it or not, it puts us in suspense to click it, and then we do, and the story gets spoiled. ;)