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Deep in the shadows..


Good job! =)

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THX! =)
sorry it wasnt that much of a cliffhanger ending, i had to go when i was writing that =P

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Lol, nice story! Wolves have money? xD Awesome.

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Thanks! =D

and LOL, you'll find out what it's used for soon enough! =o

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  Chapter 4:
 Thailia jumped. She wore a scared expression on her face. She also looked overwhelmed. 
 "What's going on? What happened?" Thalia said.
 "You must forfill your destiny. This is part of it, and you will soon need this money to complete your destiny," the coyote replied.

 "Why is all this happening? Things are just pouring on me! I don't get any of it! I'm just a regular wolf. I have no destiny! You're mistaken, okay?" Thalia shouted impatiently. 
  "Thalia, I'm very sorry. I understand all this is happening quite fast and it must be terribly overwhelming. I'm terribly sorry." The coyote replied, his voice still as calm as always.
  "Why are you like that? You're always talking like you're so important but you're not! I'm sick of it! And how do I know you're not the head Evilkur or one of them? You did have glowing red eyes and all! What's the head Evilkur's name? What's your name? How do I know you're not just trying to trick me?"
  "Thalia, you're mother died! She's gonne forever! Don't you get it? She was the strongest and most determined of us all, and we love her for that! Now she's gone, and we're all lost! We'll get defeated, and the Evilkurs will take over! Our world will fall apart! We only have you! Why don't you just listen?" the coyote shouted. His voice sounded different. It wasn't a serious tone that seemed calm all the time, it sounded...normal. It was even a tiny bit high from yelling.
  The coyote turned his back and began walking away. Then he stopped and strained his neck around. "The head Evilkur cast a spell on me to have my eyes glowing unless I found you, which they thought was impossible. They thought they killed you long ago. They thought you were dead. I was already on my way to you anyways, and so I found you. The Evilkur's name is Ben, and mine's Dusty." the coyote named Dusty added, in his new voice that sounded normal.




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Good job! =D Very nice. =)

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thanks n-gal! =D

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Welcome WMP! =D

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IT'S GOOD!

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thx! ^^

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