No offense but this is mocking some people like IWN and NGal and some others. Comedies aren't suppose to be offensive. So I would appreciate is you cleaned it up a little =]
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winkydoodles, Ive said this before, stop saying rude things about my friends in the comedy!! you dont get it, your saying really mean things. its not funny when you do that, and its not nice either. when you said, "Huh? NG54? She's mean to me..O___O
I forgot you. sry.XD" I reported you to ngal, and when she comes online and comes over her, shell also see how you framed people as rude in your comedy.
Ok, this wasn't funny. You offended my friends, and me.
How'd I offend you? And how did I offend your friends? I made it becuase I was bored. =/ Amanda told me some stuff to put...So...Yeah. She has never made a comedy. I tried.
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winkydoodles, Ive said this before, stop saying rude things about my friends in the comedy!! you dont get it, your saying really mean things. its not funny when you do that, and its not nice either. when you said, "Huh? NG54? She's mean to me..O___O
I forgot you. sry.XD" I reported you to ngal, and when she comes online and comes over her, shell also see how you framed people as rude in your comedy.
Framed?!?!?!?!!? I didn't frame! I made that one nicer!! All I put that was MABYE mean was Amanda being dumbish, but she was spending the night with me, and TOLD ME to say that!!!
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I like how you include a lot of people in your comedy. It makes it funnier. ^_^
As you already know, that last Chapter offended quite a bit of people so just clean it up a bit next time. Although I know you didn't really mean too offend them.