Awesome story so far Jayman321 Can't wait for more. I am going to read the chapters tonight (maybe)

OMG DONUTS! =o
Good job Jayman! =D

JAYMAN321 wrote:

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WELCOME TO JAYMAN'S DOGGIE ADVENTURES!!

Here are the main charectars: Jimmy, Alec, Linzy, and Pez.

HERE IT GOES!

[Chapter 1] Smashed up Wii

Jimmy: I have an idea! Lets invite Fred over!
Alec and Linzy: OK!!
Pez: Uhm..sure i guess...-_-
Jimmy: *Picks up phone*
Fred: Hullo
Jimmy: Hi Fred! Want to come over?
Fred: As soon as I finish attacking the mail man!
Jimmy:
Fred: *Hangs up*
Alec: Can he come?
Jimmy: yeah...it may be a while though
Alec: How come?
Jimmy: Letz just say our friend Bill the Mail Man won't be givin us mail today...
Pez: What ever, wake me up when he comes.
Linzy: I'm gonna go make us some lunch!
Jimmy: OOOO what are you making??!
Linzy: Pizza
Jimmy: Sounds good! I'm gonna go play with our new Wii.
Pez: Hold up! I'm comm'in too!
Jimmy and Pez: *Walks up stairs*
Pez: I go first! We are gonna play tennis in Wii Sports.
Jimmy: Just don't let me cream you tooo bad..
Pez: Well we'll see who wins! *cough* *cough* ME *cough* *cough*
Pez: *Serves the ball*
Jimmy: *Dives for it and slams into the wall* ARRGH that hurt!
Pez: I'm beating you 30 nothin!
Jimmy:
Jimmy: *Shoves Pez into cabinet*
Pez: *BARK* *BARK*
Jimmy: HEHEHEHEHE *opens his eyes wide and stands nearly 2 inches from the screen and plays competitively*
Pez: *Smashes Wii*
Jimmy:
Jimmy:
Pez: hehe
Jimmy:
Alec: *Walks up stairs and sees broken Wii*
Pez: hehehehehe
Alec:

[Chapter 2] Door Bell Troubles

Doorbell: Ding dong ding ding ding ding dong ding do-ding-ding dong di-di-di-ding do-ding dong di-di- ding dong!
Pez: Alright! I am comin!! *Answers door* Hello? Any one there?
Alec: Who wuz it?
Pez: No one. I think some one rang the door bell and ran away.
Alec: I'll go find that mean puppy!! *Jumps out the door and runs*
Doorbell: Di-di-di- ding dong! Ding dong! DI-di-ding dong!! DONG DONG di-di- ding dong!
Pez: Boohoo, our door bell seems to be broken.
Doorbell: Ding ding don-ding dong!
Pez: Arrgh I can't take it! I'm going to have to rip the wires out!
Doorbell speaker: Wait don't!
Linzy: Ahhh! The door bell is talking! *Jumps into Pez's arms*
Doorbell speaker: No! I won't hurt you!
Linzy: Save me save me!!
Pez: O.o
Doorbell speaker: *sob* You don't know what it's like being an inanimate object!!
Doorbell speaker: Every time you want to even say something to some one...or make a friend...they all get scared and run away!!
Pez:
Doorbell speaker:
Jimmy: Maybe you should be a little nicer to the doorbell.
Pez: Be nice to a doorbell?
Jimmy:
Pez: Fine...
Pez: *Walks up to doorbell* Mr. Doorbell sr, "I know how you feel...I just don't care"..O.o
Jimmy: That wasn't what I would call...nice. O_O
Pez: O_O GAH! I'm talking to a doorbell... how sad...
Alec: *pants* *knocks on door*
Doorbell: Why don't you give me a ring?
Alec: ^_^ Ok!!!!! *rings*
Door bell speaker: Di-di ding dong di-di do-ding ding do-ding ding dong!
Pez: Gah i can't take it! *Rips out wires to the doorbell*
Door bell speaker: Ouch..
Pez: *Tackles speaker*
Jimmy: NOOOOOOO!!!
Pez: Glad that night mare is over.
Alec: *Walks in the house* Haha! You are tackling the door bell speaker! HAHA! And you call me the dumb one! *Gets an apple from the fridge*

[Chapter 3] Party Time with Fred
*Knock* *Knock*

Jimmy: *Answers the door*
Fred: Heyy! So you invited me over?
Jimmy: Yeah come on in!
Alec and Linzy: *Walks in the room*
Linzy: Hi Fred! Nice to see you again!
Alec: Yeah! Nice 2 see you!
Pez: Who is it? *Walks in room*
Fred: Me!
Pez: I'm siked...O.o *Walks away*
Fred: Cool me too!
Pez: -_-
Jimmy: What's his deal?
Linzy: I don't know...but lets get the partay onn!!
Alec: Yay! Party Yay! Yay! Party yay!

So they all set up a dance party in their Play Room.

Fred: I am DJ!
Pez: *Giggles to himself*
Jimmy: Wut'zo funny Pez?
Pez: Nothin...
Linzy: Time to get the PARTY ONN!!
Alec: Yay party party Yay party party Yay!!! ^_^
Pez: Well I am going..uhm..some where else...
Jimmy: Why don't you wanna dance with us?
Alec: Dance dance dance dance YEAH!!
Pez: Uh well, maybe I'm just not feelin' the Dance Mooves today.. *Walks into kitchen*
Jimmy: Is he feelin alright?
Linzy: We're not gonna let him ruin our fun like other times! Today, we're gonna get our party ON!!
Alec: Party Yay! yay! party yay! yay! yay! party yay!

*Meanwhile*

Pez: *Gets Orange juice from the fridge*

*Back to the Party*

Alec: Party yayayayay! Party party yay yay yay party yay!
Linzy: *Dances*
Jimmy: *Dances*
Fred: Boom boom chh boom boom boom ch boom boom chh ba boom putikik ahhhh

*Meanwhile*

Pez: *Pours Orange Juice*

*Back to the party*

Jimmy: Go Fred!! Go Fred!!
Fred: Boom boom chh boom boom boom chhh putupowchh boom boom chhh chh
Linzy: This party totally rox!
Alec: Party yay! Party party yay! Yay!
Jimmy: *Breakdances*

*Meanwhile*

Pez: *Takes a sip*

*Back to the party*

Jimmy: Wow! I can't believe what Pez is missing out on!
Linzy: I know! He is such a difficult dog to get!
Alec: Party yay! Party yay! Party party yay yay yay!
Fred: I SAID AH BOOM CHICALAKA CHICALAKA CHIKABOOM!!
Jimmy, Linzy, and Alec: I SAID AH BOOM CHICALAKA CHICALAKA CHIKABOOM!!
Jimmy: Oh yeah!!
Alec: Yay! Party Yay! Yay yay party party Yay!!

*Meanwhile*

Pez: *Puts cup in dishwasher*

*Back to the Party*

Linzy: *Dances*
Jimmy: *Breakdances*
Alec: Yay yay! party party yay!!

*Mean while*

Pez: Hmm... I guess I'm not having as much fun as they are... Maybe I should join them...

Pez walked up to the party room and put his ear to the door

Fred: Boom boom chh boom boom boom chhh putupputu vvvvrroooom! Yoyo putuputuKEET boom boom boom chhh boom boom boom chh boom boom pupuka ahhhh
Pez: (Omg! He can beatbox?)
Fred: Boom boom chh putuputu pachhh ahhhh
Pez:
Linzy: Omg! Fred is soo awesome!!
Alec: Party yay! Party party yay!!

Pez openned the door

Fred: *Stops the music*
Pez: Yeah it is!! It is Party Time!!
Linzy: Aww Pez!! I knew you would come back!!! *Hugs him*
Pez: NOW LETS HAVE A PARTY!!
Fred: *Starts music again*

[Chapter 4] The Friendly Ant Friend

Alec: *Sits in the Back Yard*
Linzy: *Puts the pizza in the oven*
Jimmy: *Works on a building out of blocks*
Pez: *Watches TV*
Alec: OMG GUYS COME QUICK!!!
Linzy and Jimmy: *Rushes out to Alec* OMG WHAT IS IT??
Alec: LOOK!
Linzy: *Giggles* Alec, its just an ant! It is a kind of insect!
Alec: He's cute
Linzy: Why don't you become friendz with it?
Alec: OK!!
Pez: *Walks outside* What was the yell 4?
Alec: Why don't ya see 4 your self!
Pez: *Looks* I don't see anything.
Alec: Look harder
Pez: I am...I still don't see anything.
Alec: *Points to it*
Pez: A leaf?
Alec: NOOO!! IT'S AN ANT!
Pez: LIKE OMG AN ANT!!
Alec: Not just an ant! Linzy sais he is our new friend!
Pez: Wow...that was so worth getting up for...
Ant: Oh really Pez!! I may look TINY but my colony's spirit is HUGE!
Pez:
Ant: We can carry leafs you know!
Pez: Don't make me squash you.
Ant: Fine, I'll be quite.
Alec: Lets take him inside.
Jimmy: Good idea.

*Later*

Alec, Linzy, and Jimmy:
Pez: *Rolls eyes*
Alec, Linzy and Jimmy:
Pez: GUYS IT'S JUST AN ANT!
Jimmy: But he's WAAAAAY COOLER THAN YOU!
Pez: -_-
Jimmy: Let's teach it tricks!
Alec: Ok! SIT
Ant: *Sits*
Linzy, Alec, and Jimmy: YAY!!
Pez:
Linzy, Alec, and Jimmy:
Pez: *Picks up ant*
Alec: OHNOS!! HE'S TAKING THE ANT!!
Pez:
Linzy: Give him back Pez!
Pez:
Jimmy: Com'on PEZ! ALL THE TIME you are always bugging us! GIVE US THE ANT!!
Alec: ......... please?
Pez:
Ant: Alec help!!!
Alec: GIVE US THE ANT NOW OR ELSE I'LL ATTACK YOU!!
Pez:
Alec: *BARK* *BARK*!!! *Chases Pez*
Pez:
Alec: *Stops* *Cries*
Pez: Fine...take your...ant!
Alec: *Snatches the ant*
Linzy: Omg Yays!
Jimmy: We were sooo worried ant!
Pez: *leaves*

Jimmy: hahaha....mann, this ant is funner then Pez ever wuz!
Pez: *Over Hears and puts his ear up to the door*
Linzy: I KNOW!! I mean, could Pez ever dance like that??

They all went to bed except 4 Pez.

Pez at 2:00 AM: *Sneaks into Alec, Linzy, and Jimmy's bed room* *Takes the ant*
Alec: *Snores*
Pez: *leaves bedroom*
Pez: *Thinks* They are trying to replace me with this annoying ant....I'll show them!!
Ant: *Snores*
Pez: *Takes the ant outside and puts him in the woods*

*The next morning*

Linzy: *SCREEMS*
Jimmy: What is it???
Linzy: THE ANT IS GONE!!
Alec: NOOOO!!!! He wuz one of my best frienz!
Linzy: PEZ WHERE'D YOU PUT HIM!!
Pez: YOU KNOW WHAT? I AM GLAD THAT HE IS GONE HE WAS REPLACING ME! EVER SINCE ALEC FOUND HIM ALL YOUR ATTENTION WAS ON THE LITTLE ANT!
Linzy: *Speachless* Awww, Pez, you know that no one or nothing can replace you!
Pez: *Looks down at his feet*
Linzy: I know how you feel. Just...what did you do to him?
Pez: I put him back out into the woods! Which is where he belongs!
Linzy: You're right. He does belong there...
Alec: Oh well...
Linzy: *Whispers* I think you owe some one an apolagy.
Pez: *Sighs* Alec? I'm sorry I set free the ant friend.
Alec: Its fine
Jimmy: He looks like he's actually sorry.
Alec: No he isn't. He is never sorry.
Pez: *Looks over at Linzy*
Linzy: Alec, you have to understand that some creatures need to be in the wild, and Pez did the favor of making sure of that.
Alec: *Looks up at Pez* Oh well, atleast we had some good times
Alec: Its ok Pez!
Pez: Hey Linzy, can you make pancakes?
Linzy: Sure!
Alec: YAY PANCAKES YAY YAY PANCAKES YAY YAY PANCAKES!!
Pez: *Looks at Linzy*
Linzy: *Looks at Pez*
Alec: YAY PANCAKES YAY PANCAKES YAY YAY!!
Pez:



-- Edited by JAYMAN321 at 21:26, 2007-06-22

-- Edited by JAYMAN321 at 21:30, 2007-06-22

-- Edited by JAYMAN321 at 20:56, 2007-06-23

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