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~*The Wolf Pack- Secret Dangers*~


~*The Wolf Pack- Secret Dangers*~
    This is a story i posted on the fan fiction board on the Nintendo forums, but unfortunately, people there don't enjoy wolf stories as much as you guys do. So I'm posting it here. I hope you guys enjoy it!

Chapter One
    Sage crept along the slushy grass, eyes wide open for the glimpse of dinner. She heard a scuffle form under a log, and with a quick pounce and a swipe she had killed a little brown mouse. It lay limp in her deep gray jaws, its life sucked out of it completely. Sage strolled back to her camp proudly. She was still a young wolf in the pack, barely one year old. But her instructor, Fang, was skilled in hunting, and Sage was learning quickly. She dropped the mouse in the food pile, which was genorously stocked. She then chose a fat mole for herself, and she quickly devoured it. Suddenly, the pack leader, Sorro, howled a warning call. The wolves darted to their dens, frightened.  

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    Holly hid her furry gray head in her mother's thick white fur. She had horrible thoughts of what Sorro had warned them about. Sage, her beloved sister, sat beside her, more courageous than Holly, she was peering out the cave entrance, hoping to see what was going on. Then Sorro howled again, this time a signal for sending his attackers out. Sage had always wanted to be an attacker when she got older. They were a small pack of wolves that were highly skilled in fighting, and they protected the whole pack from dangers. It must be serious if he had to call out his attackers, Sage thought. The attackers bolted out, claws unsheathed, ready to fight for their life.

    Then Sage heard a fierce yowl from Sorro, as if he were unable to defend himself.


There's chapter One! Now let me post edit spaces... and why does it look like that? I indented and spaced things out when it was in the posting box...now its all bunched up and confusing! HELP!



-- Edited by CollarGirl at 21:35, 2007-06-20

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You may now post!smile



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Great job, Collar! aww I love it! smile

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Thx LCS! Do you know why it came out that way? I wanna fix it...hmm...Please somebody tell me, how can anybody read that when its all bunched up?cry

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