This is a story that was on the NKC...I don't know who made it, yet I love and admire the story. Here it is:


This is called Lillys adventure from some one I wish I knew from nintendokennelclub.

Chapter 1.One perfect, normal day, the Elbons family were just doing their normal things. Lisa Elbons was doing the dishes with her mom, Jonth elbons was watching football, And Lilly Elbons ( who is a beagle ) lay quietly besides Jonth's leg.
Suddenly, the dad came rushing in the house with the mail, saying " We won! We won! "
Lisa said " Won what?" Lilly looked up and thought "if they are going some where, they better bring me!"( Humans do understand dogs when they talk in this story).
Everyone stopped what they were doing and listened. "We won a trip to alaska!"
Everyone said "what!" including Lilly.
"Will I come?"Lilly asked. The Dad gave a nod, and everyone cheered!\


Chapter 2. Some where in Alaska, in a laboratory, a scientist livedthere. He wanted a dog so bad, so he could torture it. Then, he could mutate it! He hated beagles, so he wanted to do it to a beagle most.
"Ahhhhhhh! Docter Romod will not stand to this any longer! I need to find a dog! I will never get one to torture!I am the one that is getting tortured! Ahhhhhhh Even though I have a Rottwieller, I will never torture Larva!"
"Woof! What master?" said Larva the Rottwiler. He is stupid sometimes, but vicous too.
"Nothing Larva! I was talking to myself! Now where was I, oh yes, but someday, I will find a beagle to mutate, and torture!"
Doctor Romod and Larva started laughing evily, but then Larva stoped laughing and said " why are we laughing?"
"Because your stupid" said Romod. Then They kept laughing, and Larva didnt care he was stupid.

Chapter 3. After a long and boring trip, the Elbons got to the Airport. To Lilly's surprise, there were a lot of dogs there! One was a dachund, named Lucy, and another was a huskey named Maxwell.
"Hi Lucy and Maxwell! Long time no see!" Lilly said. They are best friends that lived far from each other.
"Hi" They replied.
"Where are you two guys going?" said Lilly.
"You first Lucy!" said Maxwell.
"I am going to the Bahamas with my family!" Lucy said.
"Luckey!" Lilly and Maxwell said at the same time.
"I am going to Alaska, cause I won a trip!"Lilly said. Maxwell looked at her surprised. "What?"
"Same with me!" said Maxwell." My family won a trip, and now, we will be there together!"
"I am going there too!" Lucy said." I was joking about going to the Bahamas, we are all going together!"
"Come on Lilly, Lucy, and Maxwell, we are leaving soon!" Lisa said.
"Okay!" Said the three dogs, running to thier owners!.
But what Lilly didn't know, going to Alaska was a trap, made by Romod!



Chapter 4. The Elbons, Hojobs, and Litoms (Hojobs is Lucy's last name, Litoms is Maxwells) were on a first class plane. The three families were together watching TV, playing games, and only talked. The three dogs were bored.
"Mom?" Lilly said.
"Yes Lilly? Said Mom.
" I have to go to the toilet, but I can't because Dogs can't go potty here!"
"In this plane there is, just go near the human bathrooms and take a right. There should be a doggy door. Then you can go through it and go potty! Don't worry, The Carpet cleans up the pee by using these... these, I don't know(This is in 2010)just go!" When she looked up she saw the three dogs running to the doggy door.
When they went inside, they were amazed at how big it was. It was a clear field, and then to the right side of the room, there was a doggy door and it leaded to the gym room! They did their business first, then went to the gym.
There were bars, sew-saws, tunnels, and more! They played for a long time, and when they finished, they went back to their owners.
" Wow that took a long time for you to do your business!" Mom said.
" Actually, there was a dog park on the right side of the room, so we played in it!"Lilly said, with a grin.
As the fight attendant said "We will be arriving at Alaska in about 5 minutes. Please put on your seat belts, dogs, get in your safety cages" the three families cheered, and obeyed.


Chapter 5. When they got to Alaska, the dogs were amazed at how much snow there was! They shivered so much because it was so cold!
" Why were we excited about this again?" Lilly asked.
" Because we can play in the snow, ice skate, ski, and play in the new indoor amusement park that is bigger than six flags!" Jonth said.
" But we can't come, because we are dogs" said Lilly with sad faces on each dog.
" Yes you can!"said Jonth." Because you have to take a special medicine so you won't get sick. Then, there are special dog cages with harmless seat belts! The dog cage is made so good, that you can see where you are going! And, the dog cages are at the front seats!"
The dogs cheered, then they saw a limousine pull in the parking lot of the airport. It was black. Probaly because a lot of Alaska was covered in white. Most Limos Lilly has seen was white. Lilly thought it was for some one else.
But that changed when Lola Hojobs said "There is our ride!It is the second time in a limo, right Herb?"
Herb Hojob just nodded. They all went inside the huge limo. There was a cooler, a couple T.V.s with video games hooked up to them, laptops, and more! But Lilly went to Lisa's legs and slept next to her.

* * *

They got to their HUGE cabin. It was like a log cabin. It had snow covering the roofs, and they went inside.
There was a lot of rooms! There was a Living/family room, a Kitchen\Dining room, Bedrooms with TV's and video games! Outdoor acsess, bathrooms, and a dog room with dog toys, with dog beds.
" I need to do my business!" Lucy said.
" I second that!" Maxwell said.
" I third that!" Lilly said! The three dogs went outside and did their business, then they went inside. They saw the Adults resting. They saw Lisa and Jonth playing video games. The three dogs went to the dog room to sleep.


Chapter 6.
At the Six Flags Polar Island ( who knew that it would be a six Flags? ) indoor amusement park, they had tons of fun! They rode all rides! All rides, except the Tower of Death! It was the biggest ride in the whole park!
Lilly and the dogs were afraid to go on it.
But Lilly said " I am brave enough to ride it! How about you two? " Lilly asked the dogs. They nodded in bravery and then they got in line for the Tower of Death! (ToD)
There was no line! They followed the path that goes to the ToD. They got there. And the engineer of the roller coaster was sleeping on his desk.
"Hello?" Herb Hojob said.
"My Beagle!" said the startled engineer as he woke up. He startled everyone! " Oh, sorry! I was sleeping! I had no one coming here! My name is Romod! I am going to be your engineer!"
"Yeah, sure..." thought Lilly.
They got in their seats, and the dogs got in their cages.
Then, the roller coaster started up the hill. Then it zoomed down fast speed! The Dogs felt speed pushing against them.
After the ride, Lilly got out of the cage. She was so dizzy she had no idea what happened. The last thing she heard, was laughter and words, words that said "finally I got myself a Beagle! Bwahahahahahahahaha!!! ".

* * *

" Where am I?" Lilly said.
" You are in Masters lab!" said a mysterious voice.
" Who are you?"
" I am Larva!" Larva the rottweiller said, emerging from the shadows.
Lilly looked around, and saw she was in a bar cage! Then saw Romod coming!
" Prepare Lilly, for your worst nightmare! Bwahahahahahahaha!!!" He and larva started laughing evilly.


Chapter 7. The Elbons and the three dogs didn't notice that Lilly was gone. Then, Lucy said "Great ride, huh Lilly?"
There was no reply.
"Lilly?" Lucy said, turning around. "Lilly is gone!"
The familys looked around for Lilly.
"She is gone! Gone! We won't find Lilly here!" Maxwell said, hopeless. "I heard evil laughter from Romod and him saying 'I finally got a beagle!'".
"Why didn't ou tell us?" Lola Hojob asked.
"I don't know!" Maxwell said, with a tears coming out of his eye.
"What is the matter?" said a voice out of no where.
The Families looked around and saw a German Shepard coming towards Maxwell.
"Who are you?" Said the Dad, blocking Maxwell.
"I am Jake. I am the park dog. I am sent out when a dog is sad, hurt, and ect. What is the matter, Maxwell?" Jake asked, looking at the coller.
"Lilly has gone, because Romod took her away! She was a beagle. She was my best friend."
"I never trusted that ingnorance Romod. Anything else?"
"I heard Romod saying I got a beagle, and I didn't tell them" said Maxwell.
"Well, need any help finding her? I know where the lab is, but the humans shouldn't come, because they could accidently trigger a trap, and then Romod could kill them!" Jake said. The humans nodded.
"Then what are we waiting for? Lets do it!" Lucy said. The dogs cheered.

Chapter 8. At the cabin, the dogs were thinking of a plan. Jake had told them where the lab was (which was inside Mt. Everest). He described what the lab looked like, he has seen the lab because he had done a rescue mission before.
"How are we going to get there?" Maxwell said.
"By Running there! Mt. Everest is only 3 miles away! It will be worth it!" Jake said.
"Yeah it will" Lucy said under her breath.
"How about we get the army and then blow up the lab! Oh wait, then Lilly will die...."Maxwell said.
"We should sneak in. Larva, Romods Rottweiler, has a doggy door. We will sneak in, and then take Lilly! Then we will get the police!"Jake said.
"Okay"said Lucy and Maxwell said at the same time.
"Then lets do it!"Jake said.
The dogs cheered.

Chapter 9. Lilly had a plan as well. When Romod is sleeping, Lilly will escape. Then she would convince Larva to get her out.
"Tomorrow will be torture day! Bwahahahahahahaha!"Romod said. Romod went to his bedroom.
"This is going according to plan!" Thought Lilly as soon as he heard Romod snoring.
"Larva! Come here!"Lilly shouted. She knew Larva was dumb.
"What is it?" Larva said stupidly.
"Would you be a good boy and unlock this cage for me?"Lilly said in her sweetest voice.
"No, I have to obey master, you are, st-st-stupit!" Larva said.
"I will have to go even further" Lilly thought. Lilly said, "come closer to me Larva!"
Larva came closer to the cage, and then Lilly kissed him on his cheek!
Larva smiled stupidly with his eyes crossed and tounge sticking out. And then he fell down.
"As you wish, darling!" Larva said getting up. He pushed the switch to unlock the cage. Lilly got out with with a disgusted look on her face. " Can you be a mate with me?" Larva said with a hopeful face.
Lilly stared and said "mabye".
"Wait Lilly! There are alarms! Here, I will turn off the alarms in here!" Larva said. He went to a switch and deactivated the alarms.
"Thanks!"Lilly said.
Lilly got out of the lab, and Larva re activated the alarm system. She was on her way home!
* * *
Lilly got home. There was no sign of Lucy and Maxwell!
"Where are Lucy and Maxwell?"Lilly asked lisa.
"Oh they-Lilly you got freed! Mom dad! Lilly is free! Lucy, Maxwell, and a german shepard named Jake went out to get you!"
The Mom and Dad came and hugged Lilly so hard! "I have to get to them and say to come back, or else they will get trapped!"Lilly thought.

Chapter 10. When Jake, Lucy, and Maxwell got to the lab, they heard Romod yelling "Lilly! Were are you? It is time to torture you! Larva! Why did you free her?" They were shocked.
"Well, I-I-I-I love her!"Larva burst out.
"What! Larva! Go to your cage! No not that one! The cage that never opens unless I do a code!"
"Fine!"Larva said. The dogs were all shocked. They turned around, and right after they were going to go, the door opened.
"I am going to find that stupid dog, and when I do--well hello!"Romod said as he spotted Jake and the dogs."Hven't we met before? Oh yeah! Jake, the park dog, and Lilly's friends! Lucy and Maxwell!"
The Dogs stood in fright.When they started to run, Romod shot a net out of his gun and it trapped the dogs!
"Help! HELP!" The dogs said at the same time.
"I will use you as bait, to get Lilly! Then, when she comes, I will torture her! But since you are here, I will torture you!"Romod said. He started laughing evily, and then he grabbed the net, and took them inside.
When they got inside, they went in a room and then threw them in a cage. Then he pressed buttons and they got locked.
"Pssst! Over here! It is me! Larva!"said a voice.
"Where are you, Best Friend?"Jake said.
"In the cage next to you. I hate my master! He is too evil. But I have to spy on him, so I can have more Information."Larva said.
"What going on here?"Lucy asked.
"Well, me and Larva are friends. Larva was in the lab, and then I resqued a beagle, then I talked Larva in being a spy. I put in a chip in Larva's collar. Good thing Romod was in the bathroom. He he. Larva stayed and I got away. Larva is not actually dumb, he likes to pretend to be dumb."Jake explained.
"Well now I am in love with Lilly and now I have to be stuck in this stupid cage!"Larva yelled as he banged the cage.
The dogs howled.

Chapter 11. Lilly waited untill night time, and then when it was 11:00 PM, Lilly set off to look for her friends.
When Lilly got there, it was mid-night. And then when Lilly got in, she heard Romods snoring, and went to the nearest door. Good thing that it had a doggy door!
When she got in, there were three cages, and she saw Larva sleeping in one, and saw Lucy, Maxwell, and a German Sheppard sat, talking in a differant cage.
"Lilly? Look everone! Lilly is here!" Lucy said when she turned!
"Who is he?" Lilly asked, looking at the German Sheppard.
"I am Jake, the park dog! I went out to help Maxwell when he was crying when he found out Lilly was gone, who I am thinking is you!" Jake said, as he turned.
Larva woke up and said "Lilly! You came back for us! I can't wait untill-"
"Not now Larva!" Jake interuppted. Jake explained to Lilly that Larva was actually a spy.
"Lilly! Be carful! Romod said we were bait!" Maxwell said.
"And I am here!" said Romod, and then the door slammed open, and Romod came in!"Now Lilly, prepare! For the ultimate torture! Bwahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Romod grabbed Lilly by the tail, and then threw her at the door!
Lilly howled in pain, and then she growled, and and then charged at Romod, and bit Romod so much, that Romod got so mad that he picked up Lilly by the tail, and threw her at the door so hard she got knocked out.
Larva got so mad, that he barked so much. He rattled the cage so much, and fell on it's side, and revealed a opening at the bottom of the cage, and Larva went through the opening, knocked over Lucy, Maxwell, and Jakes cage, and then they went for Romod, but then he got out a device and then put it on his arm. Then pressed a button and then a sheild appeared around him, and the dogs crashed into it, and Romod turned off the shield and then took the dogs and put them into a jail cell.
"So long, dogs!" Romod said, and he laughed evily.

Chapter 12. For two days they were tortured. Romod even tortured Larva! He found out he was a spy.
"Hahaha!!! You will never escape now!"Romod said as he picked up Lucy and Lilly by the tail and then banged their heads together. "Nobody can stop me! Hahahahahahahaaaaaa!!!"
"Lilly? Are you-AH-okay?" Larva said with pains in his back.
"Oh yes, sure I am fine! In fact, I am in my best shape ever!"Lilly said in sarcasm.
"Sorry, standard question."
Suddenly, out of nowere, A dog came and jumped at Romods back, and he bit the heck out of his back untill Romod was knocked out."Come on! This way!"The Dog said. He was a husky.
They followed him out. Then he took him to a log cabin, about two miles away. It was abandoned, and there was a doggy door. They went inside. It was like the cabin Lilly was in before she got captured.
"Who are you?" said Jake.
"My name is Lucky. But I prefer Luck."Lucky said.
"Hi Luck!" said everyone.
"I used to be Romods dog, untill he kicked me out. Then, I started living in the wild, looking for a home. No one wanted me. I wanted to give revange on him. I have been planning it for a long time. And, when I finally came, I saw Lilly and Lucy get banged on the head" Luck looked at their collers."So I decided to save you. After all of you heal, We are going to get him!"
The Dogs cheered.
"I can take you home with me, I mean, I am sure that my family will understand!" Lilly said.
"Thanks Lilly." Luck looked at everyones coller. He got big eyes when he saw Maxwell.
"Maxwell, is that you?"
"Yeah?" Maxwell said.
"Wait a minate, I had a son named Maxwell! Who was your mom? Did she die?"
"My mom was Star, and she died about a day after my birth" Maxwell replied.
"Goodness Gracious!" Luck said. "You are my long lost son!"
The dogs stared at Maxwell, while he and his new-found dad hugged.


Chapter 13. After two weeks of healing, the dogs were coming up with a plan. They were thinking on how to stop Docter Romod from torturing future dogs.
"How about we go to the place were he stores his weopons and destroy all his stuff!"Maxwell said.
"Yeah! And we can have a distraction to make sure that nothing bad happens!"Lilly said.
"Excellent idea you two!"Luck said.
"Thanks!" they said.
"But it is going to take more than that to stop Romod"Larva said. "He has a excellent security system and it is going to take good skill and strengh to do it. We should take some dogs sheilds-he has a ton of those, what a dork!-and use them for protection when we beat him to bits!"
"I will sneak through!"Jake said."I have done it tons of times when I was on rescue missions."
"Then it is settled!"Lucy said."We can go!"
The dogs cheered then left.

* * *

Lilly was sitting on Larva's back, Lucy on Jakes, and Maxwell on Lucks. They rode on the backs because they did not want to wear them out.
They got to Romods lab. It was the same as before. And they saw Romod almost saw them through a window, but they got in a bush quick enough that Romod thought it was a couple squirrels.
Romod went outside without any guns (for his morning stroll) and started walking. He was mumbling somthing like this "If I find any of those stupid dogs, oh there going to get it!"
When he was gone for good, the dogs followed Larva into a secret hatch.
"Careful Jake!"Larva said."From here on, there are alarm things that go off if detected."
Jake nodded."I see a switch over there and if I unactivate it, it should all turn off!"
"Good luck Jake!" said Everyone, and Jake made his way through.


Chapter 14. As soon as the dogs left, Jake pressed a button on his coller. It sprayed out a infered spray that would reveal infered lines that would sound off if anything went through it.
"Alright, lets go!"Jake said.
Jake started walking down the hall. "I wonder how they will react to me when I tell them that I worked in a detective agentcy" Jake thought.
Then came Jakes first infered beam. He ducked under it. The second one, he leaped over it.
"Man this is to easy!" Jake thought. Suddenly he stepped in a flor switch and then flames started flying out from the sides. Luckily he ducked under just in time. Then a moving beam was heading towards him! He ran and jumped over it.
Then a higher one came and Jake ducked under it. It was a long way to go, and Jake was still moving on.
Suddenly a blue infered beam was on the ground, and jake put his paw through, and spikes just shot up in the air.
Another thing that he had to avoid. He jumped over the blue infered beam and moved on.
A green one showed up, and Jake put his paw through then a portal on the ground opened up.
When it closed, Jake jumped over the green infered beam and moved on. there was a couple of floor switchs, but Jake went around them.
"Man how long is this going to take?"Thought Jake.
After a long time of sneaking through, Jake finally got to the alarm system shut off system, and turned it off.
Jake went to the next room.
There were tons of weopons! Jake was so amazed at how much there was, he didn't know how he could destroy them all!
Then he noticed a self-destruct room button.
"Oh My Gosh! Romod is a stupid villian!"Jake said out loud.He grabbed a backpack and threw in some dog shield packs. He put on one, then pressed Self-destruct rooom button.
Then a pod opened up, and Jake went inside. It took him out side. He saw Lilly sitting there on gaurd.
Lilly noticed him and Jake went outside of the pod.
"Did you destroy the weopons?" Lilly said.
Then they heard a explosion.
"I pressed a button that said Self-destruct room and then I got out by that pod"Jake said.
The other dogs came and said "what happened?"
Jake explained.
Suddenly Romod came and then said "what did you do? You are going to get it! I getting my weopons!"
"No you aren't!"Lilly said with a grin."Jake destroyed them with the self-destruct button!"
"Oh no! Why did I install that! Oh no!"Romod said.
The Dogs gave a big grin.

Chapter 15. Romod was in a state of shock. He was frozen. He was probaly thinking that he would be deafeted.
"Now it is time for revenge!" Lilly thought.
"Lilly, you lead the battle against this, this beast!" Larva said.
"Alright guys!" Lilly said. "We have been waiting for this day. A day, for revenge!"
The dogs cheered, and then stared at Romod. Romod was still frozen.
"Pfffffffffft! You stupid dogs think you can beat me? Well you can't, because I was a very good wrestler in college! And I still am! Hahahahahahaha!" Romod finally said.
"We'll see about that!" Lilly said.
The dogs growled, and then jumped at Romod.
Romod was prepared. He grabbed Lucy and Maxwell by the tails, but Lilly, Jake,Larva and Luck bit him on the legs, making Romod drop Lucy and Maxwell.
"Thanks!" They said and the other dogs nodded.
Lilly jumped on Romods head, biting and scratching him, Luck pouncing on him, Lucy biting his back, Maxwell biting his legs, Jake scratching and biting the stomach, and Larva was doing the arms.
Romod stood up and shook them off then ran for an exit, but they kept blocking him.
"So you want a real fight eh? Fine! I will take, you, down! Grrrrrrrr Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!" Romod was yelling.
The dogs were staying and Romod jumped at them, but they went out of the way, and Romod smacked the ground so hard that it gave time for them to start biting and scratching again.
"When is he going to give up?" Lilly said.
"Never! I will destroy you all you stupid dogs!" Romod said. Romod swore, and the dogs pounced on him.
Romod fell over and then the dogs came for him but he pushed him down.
Maxwell blocked him from going out west, Lucy at east, Jake at north, and Larva at south. There were no way for Romod to get out without fighting. Lilly and Luck snuck up at him and then pounced at him from the behind. The four dogs came and bit him so much that he cried uncle!
"Okay guys! I give up! I wanted to do this because a beagle next door always beat me up! Ever since I hate beagles!" Romod fell down in K.O.
"I will call the cops, while you make sure he doesn't go ANYWERE!" Lilly said.

* * *

Lilly went inside the lab and got to a phone. She dialed 911.
"Hello Cops? Yes This is a dog named Lilly, a beagle. There was a guy named 'Docter Romod' and we got him, and we need you to arest him. Really, you'll come? Thanks! You know where we are? Good! Bye!" Lilly hung up.
The cops came immeteatly and then handcuffed the KO'ed Romod. He woke up.
"Huh? The cops? Nooo! This isn't over Lilly! I will get you back! I swear on it! Trust me! I will!" Romod said angrily.
"No your not, because we will put you in jail for the rest of your life!" Said a cop.
"It is about time we put an end to his evilness. Now we need to go home." Lilly said.The dogs agreed and cheered, and then started their journey home.

Chapter 16. When they finally got home, they went through the doggy door, and they were greeted by the family's.
"Lilly! You and your friends came back!" Lisa said.
"I see you have a new friend!" Said the dad.
"Yes, and his name is Lucky, also known as Luck and Maxwell's father!" Lilly said.
The family's stared at them.
"Well guess what everyone?" Jonth said."We all decided use our money combined to have a mansion so we can all live together!"
The dogs cheered.
"Jake?" The Mom said. "I called the park and asked if Jake had an owner, and they said no, and you can live with us!"
"Thanks!" Jake said excited.
"Mom? Dad?" Lilly said.
"Yes Lilly?" They said.
"Can Luck come live with us? He has been looking for a home for years!" Lilly said.
"We were just going to get to that!" The Dad said. "Luck can stay with us!"
"What about Larva? He was Romods dog, but he never wanted to stay with him! Plus, he loves me, and, and, I love him to!" Lilly said.
"Sure, why not! We can have that much dogs! And if you guys have puppies, we are keeping them!" The Mom said.
The dogs cheered.
"This is one of the best days of my life!" All the dogs said. They looked at each other and laughed.
Everyone went to bed, and had a good night.

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Chapter 17.
After a week of moving into the new mansion, Lilly and Larva mated.
They had no names in their minds for the puppies going to be born.
They wondered when the puppies will come. They wondered how much.
They were excited about when the puppies will come. They wanted them to come right away, but they still had to wait.
"What should be a name?" Larva said sweetly.
"I have a couple names that could go to some girls! Rosie, Clover, Milly, and Princess!" Lilly said.
"Good names! What about some boy names?" Larva said.
"Buddy, Brad, Lou, Pepper, and Edgar!"
Suddenly Lilly started moaning.
"What is it dear?" Larva said, worried.
"Larva dear, It- it- it-"
"It's what?"
"It, is time! My puppies are going to come!" Lilly said excited.
"Really? I will get all the others!" Larva said. "EVERYONE! LILLY IS ABOUT TO GIVE BIRTH!" He shouted.
Everyone came just in time to see Lilly give birth.
She gave birth to four girls.
She also gave birth to five boys.
"I am a mother now! I can't believe it! I am a mother! And you are a father Larva!" Lilly was crying with joy.
Everyone was petting Larva and Lilly, and the new pups.
The dogs cheered, and Lilly, Larva, and the puppies fell asleep.

The end.
Next is lilly with puppys!!!


sorry, I cannot copy the pictures!!!









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