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Ponylover


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Now, many of you may think this is just another exaggeration of mine -- well, no. It truely is, my best drawing. Oh, and be prepared for some major shock.


https://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u83/wolflover91/scan0003-2.jpg
It's a Velociraptor.

It took at least 3 hours.
I love itttttttttttt. biggrin

-- Edited by Ponylover at 23:35, 2007-10-06

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Nice job smile.gif

Too sketchy though. If you want to draw realistisc, you HAVE to lose the sketchy lines. Other than that, it's very good. aww.gif

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I'm waiting to get a artist pen, so yeah.

But thanks.

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Yes, I agree, adrken up the sketch lines for teh drawing to become clearer and less messy. ;) It will look much more professional that way.

Besides that, golly that's good. Unbelievable. O_O

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CollarGirl wrote:

Yes, I agree, adrken up the sketch lines for teh drawing to become clearer and less messy. ;) It will look much more professional that way.

Besides that, golly that's good. Unbelievable. O_O


Thanks smile

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-- Edited by Ponylover at 14:35, 2007-10-07

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Ponylover wrote:

I'm waiting to get a artist pen, so yeah.

But thanks.



You should get a Micron. They work very good!

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Ponylover wrote:

I'm waiting to get a artist pen, so yeah.

But thanks.




You should get a Micron. They work very good!
Thanks, I'll look into it. ;P



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Hmm...

If you want to have my honest opinion as a friend, I can give you it..

Okay... It won't be long!

I love the drawing itself. The shading is truly amazing, and the details also. But, I do not like the back leg, the one on the floor. I know you are getting a pen, but try to work with your lines, because they look kind of fluffy. The upper jaw is too skinny, and the lower jaw it's okay. Try to center your drawings. Make a spot on the center of the paper to know where you will start.

But, I want you to take this as a positive critism. I want you to keep drawing like that, keep goin'! It's your best yet, and I couldn't do a dinosaur like that in my life... yet, so I hope you don't give up!

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Well all I can say is that is is your best yet. I agree the lines are really sketchy but other then that it  is amazing imo.

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DOGMASTER4 wrote:

Hmm...

If you want to have my honest opinion as a friend, I can give you it..

Okay... It won't be long!

I love the drawing itself. The shading is truly amazing, and the details also. But, I do not like the back leg, the one on the floor. I know you are getting a pen, but try to work with your lines, because they look kind of fluffy. The upper jaw is too skinny, and the lower jaw it's okay. Try to center your drawings. Make a spot on the center of the paper to know where you will start.

But, I want you to take this as a positive critism. I want you to keep drawing like that, keep goin'! It's your best yet, and I couldn't do a dinosaur like that in my life... yet, so I hope you don't give up!

-dm4



Deinonychus25.jpgDeinonychus25.jpgI have one simple objection, I just recently did a little research, and the dinosaur is Deinonychus, and I'm pretty sure he had that kind of top jaw, for instance, take a look at this image. Deinonychus25.jpg

Look at the top jaw. The only difference is that his is more round, and my drawing is more pointy.

But thanks. :)

I'll be fixing the top jaw biggrin



-- Edited by Ponylover at 22:23, 2007-10-07

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