Chapter One: Kernek, a large brown shaggy wolf softly crept through the forest. He had recently been kicked out of his pack as he was an omega (the lowest rank in a pack) and he had tried to fight the best male in his pack. That usually would lead to death but he scarpered, very quickly.
Chapter Two: As Kernek crept through the forest his ears twitched. He bared his teeth in a snarl and gradually crept on. Soon enough there was another rustling in the bushes and Kernek jumped and landed softly on the ground next to....
But the chapters are a little too short. Imagine you're reading Black Beauty or some book with chapters...They're usually a couple pages long, but since it's not going to be printed (i don't think) then it should be about a page long. :]
Looks great! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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