HAI ;3 I'm making the script of a movie! :D ^^ Hope you likey! Zack Roberts looks like Tom Cruise, except his hair is a little more of a dark brown.
This is part one. Each time I can, I'll keep writing. I'm very interested to make this script, it's so fun! ^^
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Bed & Clock Scene
A man is lying down on his bed, sweat drops rolling down from his face. His brown hair is soaked in sweat, his shirt is too. He stares at the clock that is on a wall, while it makes a ticking sound. He takes a deep breath and keeps staring at it.
Zack (Narrating): Tic, toc, the clock marks the time, doesn't it? I wish I could stop it, by any means possible. I had been called yesterday by some man, telling me that I have to go to some building in New York, near my home. The place, I don't know. His voice, I don't know either. Why? I think that's a better question.
As he speaks, the ticking sound slowly decreases until it reaches to a sudden stop. He then realizes he is loosing time; he sits on his bed, and with his hands he removes the sweat from his face. He then looks down to the floor where he sees his Golden Retriever, Max. The dog looks at him and wags his tail while makes a growl-like bark. Zack smiles at the sight of the dog.
Zack: Time to get up, Max! C'mon here, boy! Are you hungry? Sure you are!
The dog gets up and goes directly to the kitchen. Zack smiles and gets up gets his shirt off and goes to the shower.
Shower Scene
While he is taking a shower, he tries to relax by letting all the water fall on his body. He closes his eyes and breathes deeply.
Zack (Narrating): My name is Zack Roberts, and I'm your average 32-year-old guy, at least I think so, anyway. I live here in New York, near the Statue of Liberty. I'm surrounded by people that I don't know, and that I never knew they existed And my dog Max, if that counts. But I dont care, as long as I'm alive, it's cool.
After a while, he is dressing up. He puts on a gray sweater and some jeans, and a black leather jacket. He then turns his head to the left and looks under his pillow. He removes the pillow, and a gun shows up. He grabs the gun, looks at it, and puts it on the pocket that is inside his jacket.
Kitchen Scene
He abandons his room to walk into the kitchen, where he notices his faithful companion, Max, sitting by the fridge, faintly wagging his tail. Zack smiles and opens the fridge, and looks for something to eat.
Zack: Hey, Max what do you want to eat? Is toast okay?
The dog barks and wags his tail in a relaxed manner.
Zack: Okay then I think that means yes but don't eat my hand when I give it to you, okay?
Zack grabs some bread and inserts it into a toaster. While he is waiting for it to pop out, he opens the fridge and takes out ham. He looks at the ham and then looks at the dog.
Zack: Do you want ham in it?
The dog barks while looking at him.
Zack: Okay, Max.
Then, the toast pops out. The burned crust disgusts Zack, making an expression of disgust. He looks at Max and puts the ham on the toast, and gives it to him.
Zack: Suit yourself bud.
He looks at the dog while he devours the toast, not leaving a nibble of it. He made a grin and then bended down, until he reached the same height of the dog. The dog looked at Zack's eyes and started to pant. Zack stretched his hand and petted Max's soft fur, and gave him a kiss on the forehead. He then speaks to the dog, almost like a whisper.
Zack: Max, I want you to take care of our home. Take care of everything. If I don't come back after a time, you're free to go. Love you, Max!
Zack then gets up and walks toward the exit of his house. He opens the door and stares at the outside world, and he looks down.
Zack (Narrating): I'm scared. I don't know what will happen, or what will become of me when I reach that building. All I know is that, the voice who called me, sounded a little bit mysterious. But what the heck, all I gotta do is just go to that building, and I will wait for the unexpected.
Zack walks out from the door, closes it, and then keeps walking.
Cell Phone Scene
As he walks towards his old, yet strong car, his cell phone starts to vibrate, and then rings. He grabs it, and the screen says Private Call. He looks to both sides, and answers it. A deep, man voice is heard as he starts talking.
Voice: You have two hours to get here. Go where the statue is facing. The oldest building will tell you the way.
Zack: What? You make no freaking sense! Who are you?!
Voice: You don't wanna know.
The man hangs up, leaving Zack with a nervous look, looking at all sides, and looking down. He then walks to his car and looks for the keys, and then turns the car on.
-end of scenes-
Part two will come tomorrow or Sunday.
-- Edited by DogMaster4 at 17:40, 2008-03-28
-- Edited by DogMaster4 at 17:45, 2008-03-28
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just came by to say goodbye. Leaving this place for good. Psycho sucks. Bye.