this is a story about a wolf named mayna.
chapter 1:uh oh!

Chapter2:the death. she ran as fast as she could trying to get there in time. When she got there she saw her bro on the ground dead "BROTHER!" she said in a frightend voice. "who did this?" she said to herself.Then she saw out from her home a wolf. He was black with grey, and had a scratch on he's face. "who are you?" she said to him. then he saw her and ran off. she was shocked she couldent move for a bit. "i have to stop the war" she thought "but brother said to me......" "NO I DONT CARE I MUST STOP THE WAR!" she yelled "but how can i?" she thought then she walked off trying to think of something to do, but then she herd a noise. She looked aroung but couldent find anything are anyone but then something came out of the bushes but it was to dark to see.Then something bad happend.

chapter3:the attack A wolf jumped out of the bushes. It looked like the wolf she saw only yunger.It pounced on her scratching her leg.Then she jumped up he flang into the air she pounced on him grabed he's neck and started choking him. She wouldent stop. He tryed to get up, and he did. He scratched her face. It started to bleed bad. Then he ponced and choked her. That time she couldent get up. She strugled but couldent get up. She tryed to get breath. Then she lifted her paw and scrathed him as much as she could. Then she bit him he fell on the floor in pain. "please have mercy" he said. "but you tryed to kill me!" she said in a angry voice. "i was fourced to" he replyed. "why?" she asked. then he layed there in pain he couldent say anouther word. "p-p-please kill me." he said in pian "why?." she asked . "i dont want to live." so she ponced on him and was about to bite him but then a wolf ponced on her and knocked her to the ground. "dont touch him!" he yelled. "but he" she tryed to talk but he ran off with the wolf on he's back. "who was that." she went home to think she layed by her brother who layed there dead. "How can i stop this." she said to herself. So she layed there to think.

chapter4:cant think of a name.... she got up the next day but still couldent think of anything to do. "im hungry." she said. "b-but ive never gt my own food!" she thought. then she saw out of her home a zebra. "it looks so good." she said "but how am i ganna get it?" she thought. then she went down ready to pounce. She thought how her bro did it. So she crawed over to the zebra as good as she could wthout him seeing her. Then she jumped up grabed the zebras back with her claws. The zebra then fell on the ground it was almost dead. So she bit him on the back and he closed he's eyes and layed there. "he's dead i did it" she said. then she noticed around her were about 30 zebras staring at her "uh oh..." she said. Then the zebras went crazy they ran all around the field. She tryed to run as fast as she could but they were to fast.One nocked her on the ground the others ran past her. She layed there afraid. Then she saw the other zebras running to her. "this is it im ganna die" she said sadly. But then i wolf ran in the field grabed her and put her on the ground away from the zebras. She looked at him closed her eyes opened them and he was gone. "wh-who was that she thought. then she got up and ran to find more food.

chapter5:is that brother? she layed there thinking of the wolf it looked like her brother but was it? she got up and went home. "brother?" she said "were are you?" she looked were he layed he wasent there she ran back to were the wolf dropped her she looked around but she couldent find anything. Then she looked in the bushes and saw something staring at her. She slowly went to the bushes but he ran away. She followed him she ran as fast as she could, but then she saw he ran in the forest. "ive never been in the forest." she said, but she ran in looking for the wolf. She was lost she dident know how to get out now. She looked around and saw red eyes staring at her. She ran away from the eyes. She saw ahead of her light. "is that the way out?" she thought. She ran as fast as she could hoping it was, but then she saw a big river still alittle frozen from winter. She saw the wolf staring at her with its glowing red eyes. "i-i cant swim" she said to herself, but she really wanted to get to the wolf. So she went on the ice hoping it wouldent brake. The wind blew on her. She was hoping it wouldent make her slip in the water. Then she herd a crack looked down it was the ice she was on! She jumped from ice to ice, but then she sliped she landed in the cold water trying to get up, but she couldent. She tryed and tryed, but then she saw ahead of her a waterfall. She tryed and tryed to swim back but the waterfall was to strong. Then she saw the wolf trying to help her. He jumped in the water went under, and grabbed her, but he was to late they both fell down the waterfall. He saw a branch hanging from the waterfall. He grabed it with he's mouth, but it was wet. He's mouth started to let go. So he threw her on a tree that was around the waterfall. She grabbed on to it and climbed up. Then the other wolf let go of the branch and fell. "NOOOOO!" she yelled. Mayna climbed down the tree, and ran to the waterfall.

chapter6:was that a ghost? She ran and ran. She got to the end of the water fall and saw nothing. "where is he?" she asked. She went away from the water fall thinking. She went home and saw her bro laying there."brother?!" she said afraid. "was that he's ghost? she thought for a min. She went for a walk to think. Then she herd a crunch of leaves. She looked around, but nothing was there. The cold wind blew by her. She thought and looked around. She saw red eyes in the bushes. She came a little closer. The wind blew by her. her fur blew in the wind while she moved. The eyes disapered. She jumped back. Then looked around. She saw nothing. The only thing she saw was birds flying in the cold air. She caught one of the birbs. Slowly eating it savering the taste of it. When she was done she left she went home. Her brother still laying there. While the cold air blew past her she thought. She layed by her brother and said to herself."what is happing?" she layed there, and then she got up left to the water fall to take a brake.

chapter7:the war field.
She finaly got up. She looked around and saw....."SNOW!!!!" she yelled. she ran around in the snow. She loved the snow so much. Then she stoped to sniff. "i smell food!" she said to herself. She sniffed and sniffed trying to find out where it was coming from. Then she saw a fox. "should i eat a fox" she asked. She thought for a min thinking if she would be safe. Then her stomach rumbled. She thought of how hungry she was. "im ganna do it" she said. she went down ready to pounce, but it herd something and ran off. "did i do that" she thought. Then she saw a black wolf pounce from the bushes it loked around for the fox, but found mayna. "mayna?" he said. "w-who are you?" she said. "remember we knew eachother as kids" he replyed."k-k-kenile?" she said. "yep its me" he replyed. mayna got up and looked at him. "i thought id never see you again" she said. "i thought id never see you again." he replyed. They both walked to the waterfall talking. Then they looked up in the sky snow came falling down. It was a snow storm. They couldent see anything not even eachother."where are you?" she asked, but the wind was to strong to hear anything. She walked far away from where she was, but she still dident know where kenile was. After awhile the snow stoped she looked around, but dident see him. She dident even know where she was. She was in a place that had no grass are water. She looked around. She walked around the place, and saw a wolf on the ground. "h-hello." she said, but he dident say anything. "h-he's dead!" she thought for a min. "maybe this is the war field." mayna looked around and saw acouple of wolfs up ahead looking at her. They came closer to her. Then she ran off. She ran and ran looking for the waterfall, but insted she found caves with a millon of wolfs in them. Then she looked at one of them. It was the one that killed her brother. "no" she said afraid. The wolf turned he's head and saw her. "someones here." he said to the wolfs around him. "kill her." They came closer to her
looking at her with there red eyes. Then they attacked.


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