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Alone...or am I?


New story! I need to practice my story's so yeah...new story! I will right a Prolougue then add new chapters on everyday or so.aww
 
Prolougue:
   I sat on my bed, tired, sweating. I had just had a track meet, and I had to walk home. My parents were out of town, and my dog was outside somewhere. The fish just swam around in the bowl, around, and around, just as usual. The track meet was difficult, but we pulled through, and won. I was really tired so I layed down on my bed and turned on my telivision. I watched TV until I heard my dog, Boomer, scratching at the door to come in. I walked to the door, let in Boomer, and went back to watch TV. I heard raindrops on out metal roof and remembered seeing dark clouds to the west at the track meet. Boomer hates rainstorms really bad, ever since the Summer of 1992, when hurricane Andrew destroyed all of our town. And thats how we got Boomer, he was out neighbors dog, and the neighbor was killed when a tree hit his house. Boomer was mistreated, and was kept outside during the whole storm. I heard a loud rumble of thunder and Boomer wimpered loudley and started shaking. I could tell he was scared, just the look in his eyes. I changed the channel on my TV to the Weather Channel, and watched to see what was coming our way. "A severe thunder storm warning is now in affect, until 1 a.m, on August 29th" I checked the time, and it was 7 p.m. August 28th. "Greeeeaaaat" I thought to my self. "This is going to be a long night" I answered myself silently"

There, there is the prolougue you asked for. Suspensful, eh? :P Well...more later...maybe =P

-- Edited by Labrador_Luver at 11:32, 2007-05-05

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Wow Labby! I really like it so far. =)

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Thanks! It will get much more suspenseful...BELEIVE me =P

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Lol. xD I can't wait. :)



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Anyone want a new chapter? =P

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sad... I want another chapter!

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Yeah, new chapter :D It`s really good

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Chapter 1
  
I looked outside the window in my bedroom and say rain falling, hard. And I heard it on the roof, it sounded like rocks hitting the roof. I looked at the TV and saw on the weather channel a large storm heading our way. This storm is what is leftover from what hit Kentucky a few days ago. Five people died in a tornadoe that hit, it looked like a bomb hit the area that was devastated by the tornadoe. The tornadoe was an F4, the next to largest they could get. I held Boomer close to me and huddled up on the bed with him. Boomer was scared out of his mind, he was shaking. Then...the phone rang, I was scared to answer it, but the caller ID said Dad Cell. So I answered it, and my dad sounded worried. I told my dad about the storm and before I could get a whole sentence out he said-"Hey, get down to the storm cellar...NOW. We are listening to the radio and a tornadoe has just landed about 5 miles away from the house, and is heading torwards YOU. Get Boomer, a flaslight, some food and water, and definatley get the-..." The power went out. But thankfully they were talking on a cell phone, both of them "...Weather radio...Hey, answer me, are you there?..." Dad asked "...Yes dad, I'm here. The power just went out, and Boomer is REALLY scared dad...I am scared." I answered him, in a frightened, and quavery voice "It's OK Honey, just get down to the storm cellar NOW and you will be OK. But NOW and quickly, PLEASE!..." The line went dead. I hung up my cell phone, and went to gather all the stuff. But where was Boomer?! I called his name and looked everywhere. The wind howled outside, like 100 miles an hour. I looked down in the basement....and there was Boomer. Now to get to the storm cellar. It was under a rug in the hall-way I found the rug, and lifted it up. There was the handle, I grabbed it and pulled. The door wouldn't budge! I pulled and pulled, it maybe came up and intch. The wind was blowing even harder outside, and I could hear things crashing. I gave one last, hard pull and I went flying to the floor, But the door opened! I turned on the flashlight and walked very carefully down the wooden steps down to the cellar. I put the stuff I gathered in a corner, and closed the cellar door. I went to the far wall to look outside to look out the small, tiny window. And I gaped at what I saw. About 500 feet infront of my house, was a large, swirling, black tornadoe. Boomer was right next to me, standing on the wall, looking outside the window. He was shaking and wimpering like his life was going to end, like it might...I do not know who is more frightened...me...or Boomer.
The tornadoe was coming closer and closer, and I couldn not stop watching it. I knew that if I stayed in that spot, I would be killed. So, I got in the far corner on the other side, and tried to make myself as small as possible. At that moment I heard loud crshes and explosions from above. I could not imagine what was going on up there, but I knew one thing...the tornadoe has hit.
More explosions and bangs, getting louder and louder. Boomer was barking and wimpering at the same time. I tryed to sooth him my talking to him clamy, but it didn't work. "I wonder if we are going to live..." I thought to myself. I then turned on the weather radio and listened as best I could. I heard one thing that shoicked me so much I could not move. The tornado was currently an F5. I was scared as heck, and I wanted out of it, and most of all, I wanted my parents. I was worried for there safety. They were also getting slammed by a storm. And that storm was heading torwars us. Then, all of a sudden the cellar door rippewd off and winds wirled in side the small dark room with speeds I couldn't imagine. It took the air out of me, and I couldn't breathe for about 10 seconds. All of the stuff I crought down here was gone...even Boomer.

Really long chapter o.o
SUSPENSE!!!! :D I old ya' so! I want more myself;P


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Hello? O.o
No one's replyin:(

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I love it. =)

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