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WOW. THX Nickie-ness!!!!!!


This is a story about a husky, Named Jake, and he will have a BIG ADVENTURE!!!
Rules: NO FLAMING!!!
NO SPAMMING!!!
NO WARS, OR MEAN COMMENTS!!!


Chapter 1. Jake, Red, Shiloh, orange, Jewel, Green, and Star, blue. ME: Black...

Once apon a time, there was a place called: Genisis, A land among grass, sand, and snow.
Filled with Flowers, and Waterfalls, Fruit Tree's and NO ANIMAL ate another animal. Everything, and one, thought this was heaven. There, at the 12th of June, 2000, a Husky was born. His name is Jake. His father's name is Shiloh, his mother, Jewel, and Star will be introdused later. "Isn't he beautiful? after all the pain, it finaly came, that I see my son!" "Yes, it is. but what do you think he's mostly? wolf, me, or husky, you?" He was of course a Husky. " I think Husky..." Shiloh looked sad. But happy, becuase he was PART wolf. "Arf! Awooooo! ARF! ARF!" "heehee, I think he's hungry! Here, SHILOH JR.! Some Milk!"
" HaHa, very funny. It's Jake." " Ha, yeah, it's Jake." she said as Jake sucked for milk. They were under a BIG tree, were the sun wouldn't hurt Jake." I think it's time to go to the den, don't you think?" " Yes, He need's to sleep!"
"*whimper* Muh-M- Muh-Momm-Mommy?"those were his first words. Oddly enough, Thier Den, is actualy a BIG hole under ground. That's the end of Chapter one.




Chapter 2.
On
one hand, they went to thier "Den" and went to sleep. Jake was fassttt,
fast asleep, being only one day old, and all. On the other hand, Shiloh
was out to watch, he gave up his whole Clan to be with Jewel. "Jewel!!?!??" "Yes?" She said weakly and tiredly."Get out!!! and get Jake out NOW!!!!" A
Rival clan called the "Lafari" was there! (no animal ate each other
FROM THIS place, and these wolves wern't. Neither were they.) Jewel
quikly grabbed Jake, and ran out.(Wyatt's color is brown) Wyatt, the leader yelled: "Get her!" "NOOOOO!!!!"
they attacked her and... Jewel died. The little pup crawled under her, and dug a hole. Just before he left, he said "Muh- Mamma... :(" with a tear in his eye. He dug so long, it was 8ft. long! "Get him too!" "NO!!!!!!" but
he was too late. Foranately, it was just to small for any of them to
get in. They left. When Jake came out, nobody was there. And that's the
end of Chapter 2




Chapter 3.
Jake
was very cunfused. His mother died, his father is gone, and nobody else
was there. All Jake could do was go back to the den, waiting for his
mother, who would never come. Two days later,(He could talk) after
having no milk or food, like he could have any, he heard a "meow"...
"meeeoww"..." Hello? anyone in there?" "y...yes... who are yuh...you?" " My name is Winky, the one eyed wonder... or that's what my owner calls me..."
"Oh... why are you called the one eyed wonder??? What ARE you??!!?" "I'm called the one eyed wonder, because..." She slowly walked in... "Oh... I see...How did that happen???" "...My...Fater...
So, anyways, I'm a cat. What are you?" "I...I...I don't know...But I think I'm a dog..." Winky stood back a bit. "Oh.......I think my owner told me not to be around dogs... or wolves...or tomcats...or anything bigger than me" "OH!!! But I'm MUCH smaller than you! I'll try not to grow!!!" Winky giggled "You can't stop growwing!
That's HALARIOUS!!!Hey! My owner said something about huskies...Are you a HUSKY??!?"...
"I told you! I don't know! Why do you ask?" "Because that's ... MY OWNERS ABSOLUTE FAVORITE DOG!!!!!" "Wow...I think my mom said I was...was a HUSKY!!... But i don't have a mom...anymore..."
"I can be your mom!" In
Genisis, even if you wern't from there, if you were female (animal of
course), then you could produse milk, so you can adopt baby animals! "You can't! your not a husky!" Winky grinned as if to say: oh, yes i can! "Oh, yes I can!!" "How?" Winky exsplaind how, and now was his mother. And that's the end of Chapter 3.





Chapter 4.
Winky fed Jake, and took care of him till he was 4 months old. Winky felt as if she should go back to her owner. So, that day...

"Jake???" "Yeah, Wink?" "I...I feel like I should go back to my owner..." "Huh? Why??? We've known each other...so...long...*sigh*" Winky, well winked. (even though she closed one eye.)"You know... You can ALWAYS come with me..." "REALLY??!?!?!?!!??" "YES!" Winky smiled as they left far east to Amarica. Three days later, Jake was tired, so Winky found a cave to stay at. In the morning...
"*yawwwn*... Hey Jake? can you get breakfast?.....Jake? Where are you?" "Stop hiding, Jake!" Of course, Jake didn't answer, Winky cried, scared that her little pup had been killed. Star and Jake howled at the...well, sun. They heard a howl back... "That's My real mom! I know it!!! I'd reconize it anywhere!" Star just stared at him sadly... "Why aren't you with your mom?" Jake looked over, and saw her Beautiful face. He couldn't help but blush, yet still being a little sad."Well, you see, she died......" He told her the story. "Wow. That's sad..." Lemme take you to my den, that you've been staying in." They went back, pretty red. Winky REJOISED! She met Star, and soon Star said...
"Come on, I want you to meet my family, they're in the very back of the cave."She introdused her mother and father, and her big brother, Mike. "Mom? Dad? Can they stay with us??? you see....." She told them the story, also. They agreed, Jake and Winky can stay. Hannah, Star's mother, comforted Jake, after hearing the story and all. Winky really thought Jake had found a family, She looked sad though, becuase now she would have to leave. She looked a Jake sleeping with Hannah, and Mark, Star's dad. She slowly walked away, with her tail drooping to the ground. She told Jake the way to Her house and left, but before she did, she teased Jake about liking Star. "I love you, Jake. Please visit me soon..."Then she ran to her home.
"Where's Winky?" "Yeah! I thought she was taking care of you now!"
"Mom??!?!?! Where are you?" He saw a ghost. A ghost that looked like his mom. "MOM!!!!!!!!!!! I missed you so much! where have you been?" "Uhhh... Somewhere...up there..." "Up where? I'll try to visit you if I can!"
She just smiled, and pointed up.
"That way... You'll just have to wait to see me. :)"... "Muh-M-Momma!!!!!!!" "Don't leave!!!" "Don't worry, my dear, I'll visit... ;)" "MOM!!! NO!!!!!...*sigh*, she's...gone." And that's the end of Chapter 4.




Chapter 5. Shengu, Blue Mariku, (lighter) Brown Hannah, Gray Mark, Dark Yellow Mike, Lime Green



So, as Jake walked away...Slightly sad, he settled down next to Star. "Jake? Do you...What clan are you in?" "...What's a... Clan?" Everybody stared at him. "What? I grew up without other wolves/huskies...So? What's a clan?" "It's
a big group of most animals as in wild cats, wolves, and willd dogs.
They can be from about Five to up to Fifty! They hunt together, and
have a leader." "Then...What clan are you in?" "...The Malakar Clan. Our leader is Shengu. Her mate is Mariku." "Interesting..." Suddenly, Hannah (don't forgeet her mother) came in. "KIDS!!!!! The Lafari is attacking!!!! Get out and run!" "What?!!?!???!!! Ho--Why????" "I don't know Mike, JUST GET OUT!!!! NOW!!!" "Kids!?!? This is serious!!! GET OUT!!!" Mike, Star and Jake ran out. 'Why again?' Thought Jake. They hid behind a lake. "Honey? Where are you?!!??"

There was no answer. "HONEY??!?!" "WHAT?!?!?!" Mark said, fighting for everybody's life. "I...I...I was just afraid you wer--" "WYATT!!!!!" "CLAN!!!!" Everything was quiet. Wounds were made, but suddenly stopped. "I smell...Look around the lake! NOW!!!" The clan of 34 ran all around the lake. They found Jake Star and Mike!!!!! "Now...Bring them to me." "No!!!!!" "Now, you smell familiar..." He said interestingly to Jake. "Uhh...Ummm...Do you know my dad...Shiloh?" Wyatt suddenly turned ghost white...What was wrong? "Y-Yes...HE is your...Fa-Father????" "Yes..." Jake shivered, being held by his scruff by Lafari Members. "W-Why?" "He...He...He is a strong wolf...That's what I have to say. CLAN!!!! WE may leave these wolves alone..." The clan let go of Star and Jake, and let Mike free. As Wyatt walked away, Jake saw a scar in his back, tail, and right hind leg. "I...I...I think your DAD did that!" Star said wide eyed. And that's the end of Chapter 5.



Personally, I like it so far! Here's what they look like: (Google)





http://www.hickerphoto.com/data/media/40/husky_puppy_T3211.jpgJake

Tundra wolf pup on upper Thelon / photo copyright Gunter BaumgartStar

http://www.petandwildlife.com/wolves/images/posternow/gray_wolf_montana_400x285.jpgShengu (me pretty much)

http://mrsmoosejigsawpuzzles.com/images/Gray%20Wolf.jpgMariku

http://www.snowcovered.it/images/GrayWolf_Wolves105-FaceCloseup.jpgMark

http://www.tpwd.state.tx.us/huntwild/wild/species/endang/animals/images/mexwolf.jpgHannah

http://www.kidsbiology.com/library/image.php?src=/images/repository/Canis%20lupus1145310035.jpg&width=300&height=400Shiloh

W.SiberianHusky.jpg Jewel



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Good start! aww

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THANX!!!!!!! wanna be BFF's? I have no friends, and I know you rock! I've been reding the old NKC since 04, but never had a account. Can you check out my profile? PLZ????



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1 reply! 3 more!winksmilebiggrinawwevileye

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Helooooooooooooooo??????????????

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:D YAY!!!!!! only 1 more comment, and here comes chapter 2! (you can post twice)

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