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Deep in the shadows..-Emotional chapter up, please read..


 I'm making this story since I can juggle like 3-5 stories at once. :B Please rate this and comment.;) 

    Chapter 1:
  It was late at night and a small wolf puppy was still awake. Her mother left the day before to get food. She said she might not be back for a few days. The story begins here when big troubles begin. 
  The wolf pup was getting hungry and missed her mom. She knew her mom would come back ,though, she was just scared to be alone. But perhaps, she wasn't alone, this doesn't mean she shouldn't be scared, though, because it could be anyone behind her deep in the shadows of night..
  The wolf pup heard rustling in the bushes behind her. It startled her, because she wasn't used to noises since her mom left.
 "I'm scared for nothing over mom. I've gotten so adjusted just a little night creatures scares me!" the pup said to herself. 
 The rustle came again and the wolf slowly turned around. Deep in the shadows there were glowing red eyes looking back at her.

  Chapter 2:
 The wolf puppy began trotting backwards, not daring to take her eyes off the ones glaring back at her. Then she tumbled and fell. Terrified, she scrambled back up to her feet. Something big and strong-looking stood in front of her. It looked very much like her, but bigger and more brown, so the pup thought it was a wolf like her. 
   This creature had glowing red eyes that made it look almost unreal, but the small wolf puppy was positive she wasn't dreaming. 
 "Excuse me, I'm a wolf, too, and I'm just waiting-" the pup began, but the large animal spoke before she could finish.
 "I'm not a wolf! I am a coyote!" it shouted in a deep, scratchy voice, his voice growing louder with every word.
  The wolf puppy huddled up in a ball with her ears back.
 "Please don't hurt me, I'm really sorry," she said softly.
 "Perhaps, I got carried carried away," the coyote began, and his eyes suddenly weren't a glowing red anymore. "I never meant to frighten you, it's just I've been a little grumpy considering all that's going on with the wolves and the other night creatures. I've come to tell you something."
 "Yeah I know about the wolves and night creatures, they're all looking for food because it's the beginning of winter," the puppy blurted out.
 The coyote looked at her in shock, his brown eyes filled with sadness. Then his expression changed as if he suddenly understood.
 "My dear, it is the middle of summer, the season with most food and sunshine. Your mother told you that so you wouldn't worry and because she believed you couldn't understand what's happening right now. I must tell you, the night creatures are having a fight. A very big fight. Some wolves and coyotes are fighting against other evil wolves and coyotes and night creatures. They are trying to destroy our destiny."
  "That's not true! My mom would'nt lie to me! She said she'd be back, she was just getting me food, just wait and see! And even if it was, how would I know you're not one of the evil ones! After all, you're eyes glowed bright red!" the confused wolf puppy shouted angrily.
  "Thalia, please calm down for a moment. My eyes were glowing because I have to tell you important things, it means I'm doing a huge task. I have a special destiny, and you do, too, you just have yet to learn about it. But, I have to let you know something. You're mom went off to help us a bit with fighting The Evilkurs, which is what the evil wolves and coyotes are called, and unfortanutely,"The coyote sighed,"you're mother, Athia Nellie Thallis, was killed by the head Evilkur."

BTW: Athia is pronounced A(as in ace)-thee-uh

-- Edited by WoofMeowPal at 11:57, 2007-05-12

-- Edited by WoofMeowPal at 21:39, 2007-06-09

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Looks good! Another story I'll be reading.

Wow. O.o I'll be busy.

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LOL XD thx!
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Yesh. =D

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k ill get 2 work

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  Chapter 2:
 The wolf puppy began trotting backwards, not daring to take her eyes off the ones glaring back at her. Then she tumbled and fell. Terrified, she scrambled back up to her feet. Something big and strong-looking stood in front of her. It looked very much like her, but bigger and more brown, so the pup thought it was a wolf like her. 
   This creature had glowing red eyes that made it look almost unreal, but the small wolf puppy was positive she wasn't dreaming. 
 "Excuse me, I'm a wolf, too, and I'm just waiting-" the pup began, but the large animal spoke before she could finish.
 "I'm not a wolf! I am a coyote!" it shouted in a deep, scratchy voice, his voice growing louder with every word.
  The wolf puppy huddled up in a ball with her ears back.
 "Please don't hurt me, I'm really sorry," she said softly.
 "Perhaps, I got carried carried away," the coyote began, and his eyes suddenly weren't a glowing red anymore. "I never meant to frighten you, it's just I've been a little grumpy considering all that's going on with the wolves and the other night creatures. I've come to tell you something."
 "Yeah I know about the wolves and night creatures, they're all looking for food because it's the beginning of winter," the puppy blurted out.
 The coyote looked at her in shock, his brown eyes filled with sadness. Then his expression changed as if he suddenly understood.
 "My dear, it is the middle of summer, the season with most food and sunshine. Your mother told you that so you wouldn't worry and because she believed you couldn't understand what's happening right now. I must tell you, the night creatures are having a fight. A very big fight. Some wolves and coyotes are fighting against other evil wolves and coyotes and night creatures. They are trying to destroy our destiny."
  "That's not true! My mom would'nt lie to me! She said she'd be back, she was just getting me food, just wait and see! And even if it was, how would I know you're not one of the evil ones! After all, you're eyes glowed bright red!" the confused wolf puppy shouted angrily.
  "Thalia, please calm down for a moment. My eyes were glowing because I have to tell you important things, it means I'm doing a huge task. I have a special destiny, and you do, too, you just have yet to learn about it. But, I have to let you know something. You're mom went off to help us a bit with fighting The Evilkurs, which is what the evil wolves and coyotes are called, and unfortanutely,"The coyote sighed,"you're mother, Athia Nellie Thallis, was killed by the head Evilkur."

BTW: Athia is pronounced A(as in ace)-thee-uh



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anyone like it?

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I love it. =)

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  Chapter 3:
 "No!" Thalia shouted. She was crying and her outstanding blue eyes had become a terrible, sad pink. "It's not true! It just can't be!"
 "I'm sorry, I know it's hard. I was a close friend. I remember when you were a young pup. You're still just as beautiful," the coyote said calmly. Then his eyes stared straight ahead. They looked distant and faraway.
 "What am I going to do? I'm just a filty, young wolf! I have nothing, all I hadwas my mother, and now she's gone! I'm stuck here, deep in the shadows, hopeless and homeless." Thalia replied. Her voice siounded urgent and terrified.
 "Ah, my dear, there is something you must know about your lines." the coyote said mysteriously. 
  He motioned for Thalia to follow him, and he led her through the dark night. She couldn't see where they were going, but the coyote walked as if the sun couldn't be brighter at this moment. 
  Suddenly there was a glowing light. It was getting brighter as they kept walking. Soon the light was right in front of them. It was a glistening gold, coming from inside a cave. They went in and there was a pile of gold.
  "Touch it, it's yours. I can't for it is not meant for me to have." the coyote said.
  "But-but-how? It can't be mine!"
  "Oh, but it is. You see, your mother was a queen, your family is royal, you are a princess. Now touch it, it's yours, but you mustn't go spending it, you have a destiny to forfill."
 Thalia couldn't find anything to say. Instead, she went up to the gold and laid her paw on it ever so slightly.....
and the whole sky lit up with sun!



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