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Prologue- Clarise, a 13 year old girl with black long curly hair, was playing with her Eurasier puppy in her home in Seattle, Washington. Her mom takes Clarise and her puppy, Fiona, to the pet store late that evening. During the ride something goes wrong and a big wreck occurs. This is a storey about a dog and their master survivng

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 Clarise sat in her room playing with her Euraisier puppu Fiona. Fiona was 3 months old and very loveable. Clarise got her as a birthday present for her thirteenth birthday just earlier that morning. She was giving Fiona a bell rub when her mom called for her.

   "Clarise, get Fiona in the car, we are going to the pet store,"called her mother Lori. Clarise quickly jumped up looking at her digital clock. It was 6:30 which meant it was dark outside. She quickly got Fiona and ran downstairs into the garage. She jumped into the passenger seat of the car and buckled up and put Fiona on her lap.

   "I can't wait to get some toys for her,"squealed Clarise. She was extremely excited since Fiona was her first pet. As they got to the first stoplight, Clarise began to feel a little weird. She ignored how she felt and just looked straight ahead at the road even though she couldn't see anything.  All of the sudden the car swerved. 
 
   All Clarise could remember saying was, "What the heck is going on?" Then the car flipped over as it went off the side. The car rolle till it hit the ground. Then all went black.

-- Edited by Nickie4681 at 13:47, 2007-07-27

-- Edited by Nickie4681 at 13:50, 2007-07-27

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I love it. =) =P
Even though I've read the whole thing..xD

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I've read to like chapter 7....so I'll look forward to when you get to the chapters after that ^w^


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                   Chapter One: A Normal Car Ride Gone Wrong
    
   Clarise sat in her room playing with her Eurasier puppy Fioana. Fioana was 3 months old and very loveable.  Clarise got her as a birthday present for her thirteenth birthday just earlier that morning. She was giving Fioana a belly rub when her mom called for her.
   
  " Clarise get Fioana in the car we are going to the pet store," called her mother, Lori. Clarise quickly jumped up and looked at her digital clock. It was 6:30 which meant it was dark outside. She quickly got Fiona and ran downstairs into the garage. She jumped into the passenger seat of the car and buckled up and put Fiona on her lap.
    
   "I can't wait to get some toys for her," squealed Clarise. She was extremely excited since Fiona was her first pet. As they got to the first stoplight, Clarise began to feel a little weird. She ignored how she felt and just looked straight ahead at the road even though she couldn't see anything. All of the sudden the car swerved.
   
  All Clarise can remember saying was " What the heck is going on," Then the car flipped over as it went off the side. The car rolled till it hit the ground. Then all went black.


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Nintendogsgal54 wrote:

I love it. =) =P
Even though I've read the whole thing..xD



Thanks NGal54 =P



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Missy wrote:

I've read to like chapter 7....so I'll look forward to when you get to the chapters after that ^w^


Thanks Missy ^w^

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Wewt. >=D Reading this again. =P

Wub it Nickie. =)

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Nintendogsgal54 wrote:

Wewt. >=D Reading this again. =P

Wub it Nickie. =)



Thanks NGal more when I get back from the party.



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                  Chapter Two: Death Has Took It's Toll     
  "What...what happened?" questioned Clarise. She looked around to see what happened. What she found was devastating. Her mom was as white as a ghost and she wasn't breathing. Clarise checked for a pulse but there wasn't one.  
   
 "No.No.NO THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!"cried Clarise. Then she remembered about her dog Fiona. She looked everywhere in the car for her. Fiona wasn't anywhere to be found. Clarise slowly climbed out of the car. When she tried to walk, she feel. Her right led had been extremely injured. She limped around the crash site to try and find her beloved puppy.   
  
  "Fiona,"cried Clasrise weakly. There was no answer whatsoever. She began to get extremely worried when she heard a faint whimper.      "Fiona where are you?"She questioned hoping for a reply. Then she heard another faint whimper and followed it.  She found her puppy sprawled on the grass. When she went to pick her puppy up, Fiona stopped breathing.     

  "No don't die on me,"Clarise criend.

-- Edited by Nickie4681 at 20:24, 2007-05-12

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Anybody like the new chapter?

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