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Golden Retriever

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Left Behind


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The wind blew harshly. The trees shaked, leaves falled, the water rushed, the birds were hiding, the animals were scared, many died. What was it? A storm. The category four hurricane swept swiftly through the Rainne Forrest. Just one was running into it -- Akiani, the black, half-wolf, half-husky hybrid. Her blue eyes moved in all directions, trying to locate a shelter. Akiani found one! Under a fallen tree. She quickly ran her way in it, and noticed it was filled with spiders, roaches, and some more animals of that kind. Startled by that scene, she ran again out of it. She kept running without seeing where she was going. Suddenly, she fell into a puddle of mud. Disgusted by the mud, she madly screamed to the heavens:

"GOSH! Why are forests so... gross?! How am I supposed to live here?"

On the other side, a white, male wolf with an scar on the nose was running from the storm. His name was Fang. But, he ran straight, not avoiding rocks and fallen trees. He was searching for the Alpha of his pack, named Windswept, and he didn't care about the storm. Searching for her, he fell unto the same mud puddle as Akiani. They both looked at each other's eyes. When Akiani was about to talk, a lightning fell exactly in the tree avobe them.

"Run!" they both said.

A little while later, they were safe in a cave they found. In it, there was a little waterfall. They washed the mud out of their fur there. When Akiani was about to talk, again, they heard a noise outside the cave. A really loud noise.

What could it be? Thought Akiani...

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just came by to say goodbye.
Leaving this place for good.
Psycho sucks.
Bye.



Basset Hound

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Very nice so far! Descriptive, quick-paced plot--great job overall!

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Golden Retriever

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Thank you!!!

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just came by to say goodbye.
Leaving this place for good.
Psycho sucks.
Bye.

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