Critism wanted.

Ponylover · Moderator

Critism wanted.

Tymer · German Short-Hair Pointer

Critisim? Yaaaay! ^_^

1. The water is waaaaay too straight. It looks like it was like....glued on.

2. There are clearly visible bands where the sky changes color. Personally, I've never seen a natural straight line in my life, especially in the sky.

3. The bottom three have the same cloud pattern, and that bothers me.

4. The sun rays look odd. There is is light shing through at the bottom, though normally it starts at the top.

5. Why is there such a bright reflection on the water for such a dim sun?

That's all I've got for now.

SilverPony · Poodle

I like the first one.

In the second one the water might be the wrong color, 'cause it does look kinda glued on.

Same with the water in the last two. And I'm not a fan of the lighting either to be honest.

But you did very good either way.

Nintendogsgal54 · Flyer-Fan Admin

I like the first one, all of the others are ok.
They're right, the water does look like it was glued on. o.0

Ponylover · Moderator

Tymer wrote:

Critisim? Yaaaay! ^_^

1. The water is waaaaay too straight. It looks like it was like....glued on.

2. There are clearly visible bands where the sky changes color. Personally, I've never seen a natural straight line in my life, especially in the sky.

3. The bottom three have the same cloud pattern, and that bothers me.

4. The sun rays look odd. There is is light shing through at the bottom, though normally it starts at the top.

5. Why is there such a bright reflection on the water for such a dim sun?

That's all I've got for now.

1. TG did that.

2. I tried to fix that and I couldn't.

3. didn't realize it, was focusing on color.

4. thats the cloud pattern, can't help that.

5. The sun power was high. the sun was behind the clouds.