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Critism wanted on drawing that took 2 and a half hours.


Well, today i was bored, and I decided to draw a wewlfie.  It took me 2 and a half hours, and I didn't expect a drawing that I'm probably going to frame.  (:

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I used 4H, 2H, and 4B pencils. I do think there's some stuff wront with it, but that's just me, so, if someone else notices what I think is wrong, I'll try to fix it. :P

Anyways, any critism?
btw
sorry it's so light, that's how I needed to do my shading in order to do it correctly.   It obviously looks better in rea life, like most drawings. :p

-- Edited by Ponylover at 12:22, 2007-09-01

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...Uh, anyone?

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jawdrop.gif :O...................thats..................amazingO_O...........

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ty o:

jeez, i suppose you people don't LIKE it?
30+ views, okay then...


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welcome;D! i know i h8te it when that happends-.-

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Well I'm going to give my honest opinions, I'd rather be honest with you than lie.

-The head looks like it's not even part of the neck, the lines dividing the head from the neck are too dark.

- I don't like how the Wolf has no body, I know what you were doing.. it just sorta makes him not look like part of the background.

- I don't get what is in the sky area. Is it hills?

- What's the hill looking thing in the front?

It's still pretty darn good, don't get me wrong ;P

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_DF1 wrote:

Well I'm going to give my honest opinions, I'd rather be honest with you than lie.

-The head looks like it's not even part of the neck, the lines dividing the head from the neck are too dark.

- I don't like how the Wolf has no body, I know what you were doing.. it just sorta makes him not look like part of the background.

- I don't get what is in the sky area. Is it hills?

- What's the hill looking thing in the front?

It's still pretty darn good, don't get me wrong ;P



- I KNEW IT :D
- I'm better at portraits, so yeah XD
- Yes.
- a rock, yes, I know it sucks.


I actually have a full-body drawing coming up. :P Gonna take a while though. Probably about 3 or 4 hours.

-- Edited by Ponylover at 21:13, 2007-09-01

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Oh I see xD

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Good job, the only thing I'd suggest is a bit more detail on the mountains; it kinda looks like they're floating :p

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rofls ty peoples
doing that drawing thats gonna take forever .... basically :)
XD
so I'll fix it up afterward.

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