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DogMaster4


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Okay guys, I am going to write a horse story. I'm kinda thinking about the title, but here's a screenshot that I edited from Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron:

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"Why are you leaving me?" asked the mare with tears in her eyes.
"I am not leaving, I'm just going on a trip.. that's all..." replied Khan, the black horse on which she relied...
"You're lying," replied Rainfeather as she made a she took a step backwards.
"You got that right," smiled the mustang as he winked. "I'll always come back."

What do you think so far?

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Hello? Wow... I'm upset.. cry

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I like it! I would definatly read it! :DDDD

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FANKUUU that's the kind of answer I needed >_> XD

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OMG AWESOME!!!! make more! i love the pic!

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Thanks! Actually, the story is on the story board. :)

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WOO! I really like it so far! I like the fact its something different this time. The horse concept is awesome. I'm gonna be reading the story :)

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DogMaster4


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Thanks guys :]

As I said.. the story is now in the Puppy Tales board. :]

Or here:

http://www.freewebs.com/thesouthernherd/

IT'S UNDER CONSTRUCTION >:( XD

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That's awesome. o_o I'd read it.
One thing, the mane is really hard to distinguish from the rest of the body, other than that, it's amazing. x_X

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I know, it was just a try of what it would look like as a... story screenshot. :]

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