I wrote a song,It might not be really good,but help me out with it for any stuffs that dont sound so good.


                                ~The Next Day~
Here I am standing in the room,
Looking at the wall,think about my next fall.
You are here,Just sitting over there,I stare but you dont care.

(Chours)
..Cause its the very next day,
and I'd rather not pay to be here.
Because I'm standing in the haze,
dreaming in a daze,and I will not awake.

I'm always in a crowd,
acting like I'm something else.
And you look like your not proud to see me like this.

(Chours)

I'm just the same,so just stop playing this game.
Why should I live with anymore pain then I've gained......

(Chours X2)



So what do you think?
It took me 3 hours...>_>