OrcaGirl305 wrote:

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ah you're probebly tired of everyone talking about the sketchy lines but imo, that the only thing that needs work. o.O
Pony that's amazing seriously.
I absolutley LOVE it! The velociraptor is my all time fav dinosaur. :)

Great job :]

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Ponylover wrote:

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DOGMASTER4 wrote:

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Hmm...

If you want to have my honest opinion as a friend, I can give you it..

Okay... It won't be long!

I love the drawing itself. The shading is truly amazing, and the details also. But, I do not like the back leg, the one on the floor. I know you are getting a pen, but try to work with your lines, because they look kind of fluffy. The upper jaw is too skinny, and the lower jaw it's okay. Try to center your drawings. Make a spot on the center of the paper to know where you will start.

But, I want you to take this as a positive critism. I want you to keep drawing like that, keep goin'! It's your best yet, and I couldn't do a dinosaur like that in my life... yet, so I hope you don't give up!

-dm4

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I have one simple objection, I just recently did a little research, and the dinosaur is Deinonychus, and I'm pretty sure he had that kind of top jaw, for instance, take a look at this image.

Look at the top jaw. The only difference is that his is more round, and my drawing is more pointy.

But thanks. :)

I'll be fixing the top jaw

-- Edited by Ponylover at 22:23, 2007-10-07

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