Awesome job!! I read up to the second chapter, if you could break it into two sections somewhere in the middle that would be great, my eyes can't handle all the words all at once. >.
Nice job. =D Sorry it took me a while to gettin' around to reading your story (and posting)-my charger to my laptop broke. So I had to wait a week for a new one. ._. At least it wasn't 2 weeks-or more. O-O;; So, back on topic-I think you've made a story like this before a while back...or is this the same story? Either way, it's interesting. ^-^