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The Great Clan [Quiting...I'm so sorry]


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Hey! I finally made an idea of what I'd start it as!!! It shall be long, happy, sorrowfull, and high exitement...So prepare for the journey of a lone female, to a clan leader, to more...! Here's Shengu's point of veiw...

RATED: PG-10
Because of the use of the word mate, and even mating in this story, but they are animals.(lolz I don't think most kids under 10 should see the word "mate")

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The begginning takes place in Canada (Heehee IWN. ;]) But, since it was back then, this place was called: Jamaro Halkumi (wich in thier launguage means "Unforgotten Land")
The time of the begginning is December, 7th, YEAR UNKNOWN. But it was very far back in time.

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The Great Clan: enter the canine world.
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Hi. I'm Shengu...Life wasn't so great for me, as a child my mother died and my father dissapeared. I had nobody to look after me as I was a lone child...Or atleast I think. I had a tough time finding food, I had to fish and hunt small animals, since I was recently weined. As I tried to find a place to live, I found out there were more wolves. I went to a small, small den. Just big enough for three adult wolves to live in. I slept there and it was tough living. One day I was out looking for something to eat, when a small sparrow came upon me. I tried to hunt it, but it was too fast. He got into a tree and said: "You think you can catch me? I am too fast. I'd much rather be your friend...But I don't believe you do." "Why? You are a bird! A wolf and a bird? Friends??" I said. "Yes, it's quite possible...Now, I must do something about you. Just...Go to your parents...OK?" "I don't have any..." "Oh, well in that case, I suppose I may teach you the ways of life out here...I guess. What is what and who is who." "Great!" From then on he taught me what certain animals were, and where streams and good hunting places were. We grew a great frindship. I was a teenager in no time. But, sadly, my friend had to leave. Mirgrating, I suppose. I had to fend for myself from then on. One day, hunting for deer, I heard something...I was guessing it was just another deer, or a racoon. That's when I met...Domain. He killed a deer, and saw me "Who are you? You're not in the clan." He said. "What clan???" "The Courlone Clan...Don't you even know?" "No..." "Oh...What clan do you hail from?" "I don't hail from one." "Idonthalefrumwon? I haven't heard of that clan! Haha!" "Haha, very funny." I said. "What's your name, anyway?" He said. "Shengu...Yours?" "Domain." Then stared at him and in lightning speed, I stole some of his kill and ran far away, back to my small den. And that's where I'm telling you this... I have to go to sleep now, so...Bye...Untill sunrise, that is."

And that's where the story takes off!

Chapter 1
'Mmmph...*yawwwn*' "Sure is pretty today..." Said Shengu looking at the blury grass, trees and rock. She lived where there was about 6 feet of grass infront of her den then a cliff-ish rock place. to the left was the woods, to the right was plain old grass. She got up to her feet and yawned. "Sure is lonely out here, I wonder where my bird friend is? Shouldn't he have come back? He wouldn't need to teach me anymore, but atleast I'd have someone to talk to but my self and that mysterious wolf...Wasn't his name Doman? Domain?" little did she know, Domain was just to the woods, lapping up water. *Splash* "What was that? Sounded like water...I wonder if a fish breakast is on my menu!" Shengu said excitedly. She stretched out her body and went into the woods, heading towards the stream only about 1/5 a mile away or less. There she found Domain. "What are you doing here, deer theif? *snicker* You think you're such a clever one, hmm?" He said. "Yes, I do. *giggle* But you're not that bad..." Shengu said. "Hey! I can prove to you I'm just as clever!...Infact, I think I'll prove I'm more than you!" said Domain. "Oh, you will?" "Yes." He said. "Then show me you're clever enough to catch me!!!" said Shengu as she ran away into the big field near the woods. (where the deer were) Domain quickly followed, knowing he wanted to be better and much more clever. "Haha!!! You'll never catch me!" They ran into more woods with a big hill. Shengu ran so fast, when she got to the hill, she started rolling down! Domain ran fast too, sliding on his belly and front paws out. Shengu quickly tried to get up, resulting in her sliding down on her seat, in a sitting, yet slatted back position. "Whoohoo!!!" Yelled Domain. "YEAH!!" Replied Shengu, as they raced each other down the hill. Shengu, heading straight for a tree had no clue what to do next.

She yelped just a few feet away from the tree, not knowing how to turn or stop. Domain quickly put his head down and went very fast, and turned sideways to push Shengu out of the way. It was successfull, but as soon as he pushed her, his foot hit the tree and got bruised and scratched and even sprained. He stayed there, at the side of the tree he hit, not knowing what to do, since his foot was sprained. Shengu was in Domain's old position sliding down the hill, but backwards! She tried to stop, but it didn't work, so finally, she jumped up and was on all fours, and stuggled to get up, with all the slippery leaves. When she got there, she walked side-by-side with domain, helpping him walk.When they got to the top, in the field, Domain layed on his side, not being able to stand. "Are you OK?" Asked Shengu "Are you?" He said quietly. "Yes..." "Then I'm OK too." Shengu was suprised and then smiled warmly, laying down beside him.THey layed there for a minute and Domain looked at his foot. "I know it must have hurt, thank you so much." Shengu said. "Your welcome, my lo-- I mean, Shengu." Shengu just smiled and licked his face. "All better! Haha" Said Domain. "I wish" he said. "You know what? I don't think you can make it back to your clan...But my den is just around the corner, past the woods." "Back There?!?!" "No, the other woods. The one you drank water at." She said. "Oh...OK" Domain said as he smiled. Shengu walked Domain to her den. "Man, this den is small...Only enough to fit two wolves and a few pu-- I mean three wolves...Sorry, I'm so messed up today..." Shengu just laghed and said "I know that you were going to say lovely... and pups...I don't mind..." then she smiled. "You...Don't?" "I want to tell you something, Domain." "Me too." Shengu said shyly: "I love you too, Domain." Domain looked into her beautiful eyes and said "Will you be my mate? I don't care about my old clan" "Yes!! Of course! I know you love me and you know I love you! I was waiting for you to ask!" So that night they slept and now each other was happy, and Shengu was definetly not lonely any longer.

Chapter 2
In the morning Shengu woke up, but not Domain. He was much too tired and his foot needed to heal. *tweeet* *tweet* "Wha...What was that?" Said Shengu. As she peeked out the den, up in the tree near her den was a nest...Two sparrows and thier babies. "Shengu?" Said the father. "Sparrow??? IT'S YOU!!!" "Yes, it is! I'm sorry I took so long to come back. Here, is my wife: Patunia. And my three children, Moe, Joe, and Josifina!" he said "And my husband Laurie is so sweet!" said Patunia "Your name is *giggle* LAURIE?!?!? Isn't that a girls name! Haha! You never told me your name!" Shengu said. "Patunia, I told you NOT to tell anybody my name!" Said Laurie. All the racket awoke Domain, who limped out to see what was happening. "What's up out here? A bunch a sparrows...Why do you talk to them instead of eat them?" Said Domain. All the birds scooted back a little. "The father bird was my best friend until you came along...He knows everything! I would never eat him, or his family!" Shengu said. Domain shook his head. "Oh, Laurie! My mate has sprained his foot, and it is also bruised and scratched. Do you know anything to help him?" "You have a MATE already?!?!?" Said Laurie. "Well, not exactly....Er...Well not yet but we will, it's already official." Said Shengu.

"Oh...My mate is more then official, haha! OK, anyway, *ahem* Yes, I do know of something to help your mate...A mix of huckleberries and...Ruby peices. The huckleberry is found everywhere here, but the ruby...One holds it around his neck. But he will not part with it unless he dies...And he loves it much." "Oh, I would never kill him...Only if he tried to kill me!" Shengu said. "It's okay, Shengu! My foot will heal in the most, a month." Domain said. "But Domain, you can't hunt, wich would make it hard on me and you sick, or even couldn't mate with me with a foot like that! I must!" Shengu said. "Oh Shengu...I wouldn't let you do that, and maybe even risk life." Domain said. "Then she will not. I WILL." Laurie said. "NO! LAURIE!!! YOU HAVE A WIFE AND CHILDREN!" Said Patunia. "Patunia...I will not live much longer anyways. I have passed all of my wisdom to you and the kids, and even then, I might not die." Laurie said. "Oh, Laurie! I couldn't let you do that!" Shengu said..."I will. I do not have a mate nor family. Or even any friends, everyone thinks I'm evil." Said a mysterious voice. Out stepped A black wolf with red eyes. "All I ever wanted to be was a hero...A friend...A mate to a wonderful girl, to have a family, to have friends, to have white fur...The reason anyone would think I was evil was by my fur and eyes...I have no life. My own mother didn't want me. My name is Demon, because my parents thought I was one sent as a curse to the other pups...But I was nice to them! I...I...*sniff* sorry, I don't think I should talk to much about myself to strangers." "Oh I wish I could help you! But I can't help you with finding a spouse...I am already together with Domain, and I know no other wolves...But I can help you with the friend part. You are so kind to go out and get the ruby and huckleberries." Shengu said. "And I can help you with your fur and eyes!" Said Laurie. "Come with me!" He said. Laurie left and Demon followed. A few minutes later Laurie came back with a SHINING white wolf behind him, with blue eyes as clear as the sea. "Demon?" Shengu said, suprised staring at the wolf she now thought was Handsome..."WOAH. Demon... You look better thn Dom--...Oops! I mean you look better than any other wolf I've ever seen!" She said. "Hey! Shengu...What do you mean?" Domain said sadly. Shengu was almost hypmotized by his new look. "I'm NOT Demon anymore...I'm Angel." "Oh...Angel...*stare drool*" Shengu said. "SHENGU!!! STOP! You love me and only me! Angel, please...Help me but do not let Shengu love you more than me." Domain said. "Shengu! The reason he's going to get the ruby and huckleberry is so that I can be healed and we can be mates!" He said.

"Oh...I'm so sorry Domain! My love, I'm so sorry!! Please, if there is anything I can do to say sorry!" Shengu said "To say you still love me and mean it!" Domain said. A tear fell to the ground. "I do love you Domain! More than any other wolf! Only my Lord is who I love more than you!" Shengu replied. "Oh thank you Shengu." Domain said. "I'll be leaving now" Said Angel as he left. "Good luck..." Domain said. "Well, I better go find some food for Moe, Joe, and Josifina." Said Laurie. "And I better get some sleep" Said Domain. "I'll guard the babies" Said Patunia. "And I'll stay watch for Angel." Shengu said. They were all busy with what they had to do, while Angel looked for the wolf who had the ruby. Deep in the woods, Angel heard something. A wolf jumped on him and fought. Only a little though. "Stop! I need something!" "Wha......Who are you? I'm sorry, I thought you were someone else." Said the stranger. "I'm Angel. I have come for that ruby." "You don't get it. I got this from my wife...Before she died." The stranger said, sad. "Oh...Sorry. How did she die?" Angel asked. "A wolf- which I thought was you who was evil." He replied. "Oh, I'm so sorry! But...This ruby...Do you know where she got it?" "Yes. Why do you want it so badly?" The stranger asked. "Well, some wolf has a broken leg. The only cure is huckleberries and ruby." Angel said. "Oh. Why is it that serious?" Angel explained everything. "That doesn't seem that serious. How much ruby do you need?" The stranger said. "I need as much as you can give me. What's your name anyway?" Angel said. "My name is Dan. There is some up in the highest mountain here and at the top. There will be many small rocks, and if you open them, there's ruby. Your name?" Dan said. "Angel. Thank you so much!" "Your welcome. Good luck, Angel!" Now it would seem silly that someone would do all this just for someone with a broken leg, but not only did that help Domain, he would have a better reputation and could see himself as a hero. Fortunatly, the mountain was very close. He climbed up, and fell many times, leaving him even more scarred. Once he reached the top, he grabbed a rock in his mouth and started down the mountain. Suddenly, he was sliding down top speed, zooming down the rocks. He was so bloody now it stung more than a a thousand bees. When he reached th bottom he barely, but did, made it to Domain and Shengu. "He's back! And he's...Oh my! He's injurred!" Shengu said. "I'm sorry, I couldn't get the berries." Angel said, in a weak, exhausted voice. "Thank You so much, Angel!" Domain said. "Your welcome." Angel said. "I'll get the huckleberries, no worries!" Shengu said. Angel smiled. Laurie healed the wounds on Angel. Shengu left and got the berries. And when she came back, Laurie crushed the ruby and huckleberries and put it on Domain's leg. After an hour, his leg was healed. "I'll be right back" Domain said, running off. He came back an hour later with a rabbit in his mouth. "This is for you, Angel. Stay over there near us at the other den. I will bring you food every day for what you have done." "Thank you" Angel said. He ate the rabbit. Later he went to the nearby den and selpt. Now Angel had friends and was a hero afterall. But he still didn't have a mate. But Domain was healed and Shengu and Domain had one more wolf in their small group, and they all went to sleep.

Chapter 3
Domain woke up suprisingly early that morning. The stars were still out in the sky, and he went out to catch food for Angel. He brought a rabbit back to Angel's den, where Angel was still asleep. He wouldn't dare wake up anyone, knowing the day before was tiring. So he sat next to his den, staring up into the sky. He thought, just for a second, he saw his mother, licking him and another pup. He went to the den to lie down, still looking at the unusually beautiful stars. He could then yet see his friends playing as teenagers. Then, in a split second it all dissapeared with an interrupting noise..."Domain?" Shengu said. "Yes, my love?" Domain replied. "I was just...Looking at the sky." He said. "Listen, I miss my family too. My mother died and father dissapeared. I never had any friends and I don't believe I had any siblings either." "I'm not even sure what happened to all my friends and family now. They could be dead, sick, worried, or anything. But I guess you had a worse life then me." Domain said. "It's almost like we have no family but each other." Shengu said, with a sad face yet grateful smile. Domain smiled back, getting up and laying beside her. "And you know what?" Shengu said. "What?" Domain said. "I'm ready...to...well...Have more family."

"Y...Yo...You mean...Uhhhh...Ummm...O...OK...!" Domain replied suprised. So that night, that magical night Domain and Shengu mated. As domain jumped off, Shengu said: "I'm now a mother...I'm so happy!" She said with a big smile, with her eyes closed. And the sun rose up and Domain came out to see if Laurie was awake. "Laurie? Laurie! Please, wake up so I can tell you something!" Laurie woke up and stood stretching his wings out and yawning saying: "Yes?" "Oh, Laurie! Me and Shengu are now mates!!!" Domain said wagging his tail. "Great, my boy! Let me tell you, you picked a lucky one!...Well, may I see her?" Laurie said. "Oh, yes! Shengu! Laurie wants to see you!" Domain yelled. "Did ya' hear the good news?" Shengu said, walking out of the den, sitting by Domain. "Oh, yes, I did! I'm so very happy for you! I'll be sure to tell Patunia and the chicks about the good news!" Laurie said. "And I'll tell Angel!" Said Domain. "What are some good names?" Shengu said, excitedly. "I like the boy names Ghoundo, Mark, Luke, and Domain Jr. Haha!" Domain said, laughing. "Haha, I like the girl names: Jakahni, Hannah, Lilly, and Miaka!" Shengu said. They all agreed they were all good names and Shengu layed back down in her den to rest, getting some sleep that was needed. So, Domain went to Angel, who was eating the rabbit. "Oh, thank you, Domain! But tomorrow, I do not want you to feed me. Now, what is it you came to tell me?" Angel said, excitedly. "Shengu's pregnant!!" Domain said, even more excited. "Oh, great! Most of my work is paid off now!" Angel said wagging his tail extremely fast. And so, as Domain came back he quietly crawled into the den to Shengu, awakening her. "What is it, Domay?" "Come out with me and close your eyes. And don't open them until I say so!" He said and walked her outside the den. he whispered to Laurie about something. Then he ran to Angel, telling him as well. Domain came back, with Angel and Laurie with his family at the edge of their nest. "You can open your eyes now!" Domain said. As Shengu openned her eyes, she heard: "SUPRISE!!!" They all yelled. The rest of the day they all congratulated Domain and Shengu, mostly Shengu though. And that night they went to sleep, and Shengu was pregnant and had more family, as well Domain had more family.

Chapter 4
When a few weeks had past in quite a boring way, Shengu was very pregnant by then... It was January, and it was cold, but thier new fur kept them warm. Shengu would be pregnant until March, the expected time of birth. As she woke up, she headed outside to get the most of the heat of the sun. Domain woke up an hour later, and sat next to Shengu. He turned his head away from the sun rising to Shengu. Shengu looked at him and smiled. "You know, Laurie said you were likely to give birth in March. That's 4 months, you know! It's 3 by now." Domain said, waking Laurie. "You know, I can tell how many puppies she will have by now. Not thier genders, but how many." Laurie said. Laurie was very smart. Infact, he was one of the smartest birds in the world, although he was just a Sparrow. "Oh, please do!" Shengu said, exitedly. Laurie flew down to Shengu and felt her belly. "Five. Five of them!" Domain became a little protective of his mate as Laurie touched her, but knew he was a trusted friend. Domain suddenly thought: 'Wow, my mate...Five puppies! I have to protect her and her pups. With my life. Woah. I never really noticed how much I care about them. I feel like it's my JOB to do so in protecting them.' It was his instinct, to protect them with his life. Then, he knew this family will survive with him.

He stood up and told Shengu that it was time for breatfast: "Well, Shengu. I think it's time for breakfast! Don't leave your pups hungry!" He said. "Oh, right! OK, bye Laurie!" She said. "Bye!" Laurie replied. So Domain and Shengu set out to catch breatfast. Domain, now feeling like he had to protect Shengu and her pups, he walked side-by-side, not letting her out of his sight. He stopped and told Shengu to sit down for a minute. He heard something. *crunch* went the leaves. He saw a figure moving amongst the trees. He stared closer, not seeing it anymore. Suddenly, behind him he heard a "Hi!" He jumped to the noise, now facing what made it, snarling and growling with his fur straight up. "Woah! Domain! Coooool it! It's me, Angel!!!" He said, jumping back a few feet. Domain still looked mad and sat down. Then he remembered what Angel had did for him. He looked sad and suprised saying: "Oh! Oh, no! I'm so sorry it's just that...I...Uhhmmm..." He sat down with his head down. "It's just that your protective over your mate? I understand. Especially now that she's pregnant, it's just your instinct." Angel said, forgivingly. "I'm sorry, Angel. You're right." Domain said. Shengu just sat there looking at the two, suprised. Domain noticed her staring and said "Sorry to scare you like that, my love. C'mon, let's go find breakfast!" He said. "I know a great hunting place! Just down the river, there's some bunnies." Angel said. "Thanks." Domain replied. So they headed down by the river, while Angel went to his den. Shengu stared at Domain. "You know, if that were to be a bear, you would've almost gave up your life...For me! Do you really love me that much?" Shengu said. "Of course, Shengu! You're my most loved thing but the Lord." Domain replied. They caught breakfast and headed back to thier den. That was really the only exitement for the next few weeks. Not too many animals lived in those parts. Just deer, wolves, and rabbits. But occassional visitors! So the rest of the day, they ate the rabbits down the stream for dinner. They went to sleep and Domain was willing to give his life for Shengu and her pups.

Chapter 5 PART 1
As the days and weeks went on it was Febraury. It was becoming warmer, with fllower buds and tree srouts and green grass appearing. It was beautiful there with trees turning green and snow melting. It was a month until Shengu's delivery, but something disruptred the beautiful calm peace. The skies were cloudy, dark, and full. A horrible wind was blowing new trees down and destoying some of the new plants. Lightning was crashing everywhere, destroying other trees and such. That storm was not just a storm. It was about to become a tornado. Every animal that lived there was terrified. They do not have basements or any safe rooms. They could do almost nothing. But Laurie new that there was a cave in the hill they lived on. But it was down that same hill Domain got hurt on. And it was closer to the tornado. But there was no time. It was either death or cave. Laurie told them. "There is a cave down at the bottom of the hill that is very deep and has much protection! I just don't know how to bring my children!" He had to yell for the wind was hard to hear through. "Well it's either that or our end! I can't let my or your family down!" Domain said, in his protective mode. "Tell me the way!" "It's down acroos the field into the woods! Just head down the hill until the end and there's the bottom of the ciff, the make a left!" Laurie yelled. Imidiately Domain headed out into the feild yelling for them to come. Patunia, starting to cry didn't know what to do about Moe, Joe, and Josifina. Shengu came up to her and said: "Put them under your wings and jump on me! You can trust me! It's the only way!" Patunia, scared, stared at her "There's no time! Hurry! You're children matter just as much as my own!" Shengu said. Patunia nodded and Shengu came up and the baby birds hopped on and Patunia jumped on as well. Laurie went off to bring Angel. Laurie stayed on Domain's back. Domain in the lead of them all stopped at the hill. "Slide on your belly! Shengu, you don't! Kneel and grab my tail with your paws!" Obeying his commands, They did so. Getting to the bottom they scurried and squirrmed into the cave. Shengu let them all of her back once they reached the back. Laurie jumped off immediately, and Patunia and Laurie went to start to take care of their babies. Shengu and Domain, layed next to each other while Angel, all alone, stayed in the corner. "Angel..." Domain said "You can lay with me and Shengu" Angel, suprised, went slowly to them. For the night, all they had to eat was the few bugs that flew in from the wind. For the rest of the night, it was believed they were the only mammals left in all of that land. They fell asleep but Shengu. You'd think it would be Domain, being so pretective, but no. But later Shengu had to get some rest too. They woke up to a little bit of rain and a still dark sky. But it was light gray, not black. Worried about their homes, they struggled back up the hill only to find two thirds of the trees left, barely any grass, and no animals. A few fish would have been lucky to be alive. The dens were okay, but the tree and nest Laurie and Patunia lived in was gone. Everything was a mess! What would they do, with no deer to hunt or fish to eat? Where would Laurie's family live? All the horror was right in front of them. They had to leave the land they called home, and find a new home. So down the hill again they went off into the deep woods that was below the land. So they went forth into the land they've never seen...To Be Contiued...

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-- Edited by Animal_Lover at 21:52, 2008-01-18

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Chapter 5: PART 2

And so, as the day passed, they decided to sleep in the cave once again. There was not much life down there, but there was more there then the land they once lived. That night was another unpleasant night. When they woke up to a rainbow shining over their heads. Unfortunately, that was the only beautiful thing. Poor Shengu had no place to give birth, and Poor Laurie and Patunia, having to make a nest in a cave with dead, wet, branches. It was a bad time. But, they had to carry on and be possitive, or it would never be better! So, Shengu came out, howled, and heard no return call. Were they the last of the wolves? No. They couldn't. But, it was possible. Domain stepped out and stretched, and came up to Shengu. "Hey." He said. "You okay?"


"Oh...I'm...Uhh, fine.......Domain? Do you think us three wolves are the only ones left?! I'm scared!" She said, frightend "I'm sure not! But...It's possible. I sure hope not...All my family...And friends...Gone." there was a sudden silence. When Shengu started crying. "This is hopeless! We don't have a home, there's almost no food left, we're the only wolves left...I don't want this all to happen!" She started to whine. "It's okay, love. I'm sure there's animals left somewhere. I'm sure somebody else was smart enough to find shelter! Plus, not all tornados hit everywhere! I'm sure you'll be okay, and any other animal is too." "Your right." She replied. "Let's go." So Shengu and Domain went off into the forest. They looked for hours. When suddenly in the bushes they heard something. *shhhhh chhhhh crack* Then all of a sudden it jumped out! "BOO!" "Ahh!" Shengu barked loudly. Domain and Angel, who was the scary thing in the bushes started cracking up. "Ahahahahaha! You should have seen your face!" Angel said. They fell on the ground laughing! Shengu didn't think it was funny. She just stared at them, in a "Your pathetic" look. "Oh, c'mon Shenie! It was a joke!" Angel said. "Well, I didn't find it very funny! I thought you were a bear ready to kill me and my pups! And never call me Shenie! I don't like it." Domain just stared. He didn't think of that. He thought she thought it was another wolf, or a ghost or something. He immidiately come up to his feet and said "Sorry." Shengu , in a mean way stared, stared at Angel. "Okay! Okay! Sorry! I didn't know." Shengu smiled and then they went looking once again. "*hmmm hmmm hmm hm hmmmmmmm tra lalalalalalala, bee doop de boop lee dee dee dee da, be ba dah ke kah bah bah bah, lalala--*" Angel hummed. "Please stop. That highly irritating" Shengu said. "What's wrong with her today?" Angel whipered to Domain. "Oh, I don't know. She was really sad too." Shengu was becoming more dominant and a little touchy too. Something was letting Domain know: When she had pups, she'd be telling him what to do. He'd be second in lead. Now, he wouldn't really mind but the fact that she was more likely to leave him for another wolf when he was mad at her or something. He'd have competitors for His right to mate. He was scared, for he didn't want her to leave him. He wouldn't be Very sad, but he'd be a pretty sad. But, anyway, it was getting vey tiring to walk around all day, and they had not found a place to live yet. So they went back to the cave. They told Laurie and he just stared at the ground..."Aha! I've got it! I remember!" He said bringging his head up, startling everyone. "What?" Domain, Shengu, Angel, Moe, Joe, and Josifina at the same time. "I remember it! I was migrating to find a mate, Patunia, and I went across these woods...I saw a big cave and a good hunting ground, and a lot of rocks and soft spots to sleep!" He said exitedly. No matter how mature he was, he was a sparrow, and they can get pretty hyper! "Yes!!!" Angel said "Oh Yeah!" Domain said. "How wonderful! I can have my pups without the scary feeling of rocks fallling and blocking the cave!" Shengu said. They stared at her for a second. Then Domain broke the silence and said: "Let's go!" and they got ready. Laurie on Angel, and Patunia, and her chick, once again, on Shengu. And Laurie decided, them having to see him (and Angels fur being too slippery), he would fly very low and lead them. After an hour of traveling, they got to the place. It was wonderful! /but, they decided, the cave would only be for cold days, pups, babysitters, or bad weather. Otherwise, they should sleep near the rocks. Laurie found a close tree just perfect, and alive, and very strong to build a nest. It was possibly the best place ever to have a family or an entire clan! It could, in total, fit almost seventy wolves. And if there were more than that, there was a nearby one too! They felt a little guilty taking such a great place with three aldult wolves, two adult birds, three baby birds, and soon to be five wolf puppies. That's a total of thirteen living animals. But, hungry, they could not marvel the place forever. There were plenty of birds, but...Well, you know. The poor birds would be scarred for life! In that case, they didn't have much to eat. They tried to hunt seven moose, but caught one. They all ate it, but the birds. And they were just as well hungry!

And so, Laurie went and caught five worms! There may not be much mammals left, but after rain there was a lot of worms! Plus, they were safe under the ground. So as Domain, Shengu, and Angel said their thanks to their God for providing, they ate. Shengu got the liver. When Domain came close to eat some of it, she growled. It was becoming more obvious. He frowned, but knew: atleast he was the alpha male. He'd have control over all others but Shengu, so it wasn't horrible. Not wanting to waste the food they needed, and wanting to give the moose time to make more of it's own kind, they buried the rest. The day was satisfying and great. and, it kept that way for a while.

Chapter 6
In the morning, Angel woke up only to have an urge. It was almost spring and he needed to find a mate more then ever. But alas, it seemed like they were the only wolves in this land. It was kinda gloomy for poor Angel, not having a family. Even after he had changed himself, no girl was even there for him, but Shengu. But, Shengu was already with Domain. There's was no doubt about that by now. So, the urge so strong, he sat there from where he slept near rocks...Shaking. He looked scared, or as if he had an itch he could not scratch. Domain woke up, who was sleeping in the den with Shengu. He went out to see if everything was okay. He spotted Angel, sitting there, paralyzed...Frozen. His eyes were big and fur stiff. His teeth were showing, and of course, he and his teeth were shaking, and it all wasn't because he was cold. The urge was inside him, and he was trying as hard as he could to control it. He wouldn't even budge his pupils. Domain came up really slowly, wondering if he was sick. "Uhhh...Angel?" Not a sound after that, not a move. He came up in front of him. "ANGEL!!!" Angel snapped out of it, still shaking, eyes big...But at least he moved his pupils to Domain.


"........Y-yes?" "Are you okay?" ".............." He just looked into the sky. He was a really cool guy, but now he seemed as if he was possessed or sick. He looked back at Domain, eyes bigger then before. It was starting to become really scary for Domain. He scooted back. "M-m---" Domain was confused. "M-mate." He said eyes looking like the size of baseballs. Domain, disgusted and scared, and instincts kicking in, he ran to the den which Shengu was in. Angel looked ashamed, but still wanting to find a mate. He was crazy. He ran to the den. Domain growled...A lot. Shengu woke up, scared seeing Domain growling and Angel sick looking. "I-I must hold b-back!" "What?!! Hold back What?!!?" Shengu said. "Y-you!" Angel said. Shengu, looking mad suddenly, got up and went to the back of the den. Domain growled "GET OUT! NOW! Leave!" "N-no! I can hold back the urge!" Angel said...Lying. "Fine. But never come even five feet from this den again!" Domain said, mad looking again. Angel looked very ashamed, going near the woods. He sat there again, shaking. Shengu was worried. She looked at Domain. She couldn't get out without Domain not pulling her back. "Domain?" She said. "Yeah??" She tried to think of something to get out. "Uhh....Er......I gotta go." "Where?" She then could think of nothing but "I gotta go!" "Uhh...Ok...Errr...Then...go." He was kinda confused. Shengu looked embarrassed, knowing what she said. She went out to Angel. He looked at her. His eyes were bigger then they had ever been. Then he had an evil, devious little smile on his face. "No Angel! You can hold back!" She yelled. "N-No I can't." He said, even more evil-looking. Domain heard. He ran out. Angel snapped back. He stared. He glanced at Shengu, and then Domain, then Laurie, then back at Shengu again. He now had a scared face. Once again shaking.


"Angel?" Laurie said, waking up. Angel stared. There was a silence. Angel quickly fled far off into the forest. "What's wrong with him?" Laurie asked. "He wants to...er...mate. He's gone crazy!" Domain said. "Ahhh, I see. He could not hold back any longer, he had to leave, or he would have mated with Shengu. He was saving your love." Domain and Shengu both looked surprised. They didn't think of that. And so, the day passed on, and Shengu and Domain went into the den again. "*sigh* Poor Angel." Shengu said. "POOR ANGEL?!?! He tried to mate with you!" Domain said, turning red. "But he fought back. But he is now in the forest all alone...With nothing to eat." Shengu said, sad. "With his craziness, he could catch an elephant if he wanted to!" Domain said. Shengu still felt bad. They fell asleep and Were the only wolves left in their territory.

Chapter 7
It was now March. All the flowers and grass and everything was growing back. The animals were multiplying, leaving food for any animal that lived there. All the damage ever took was back. But no one agreed to going back up the mountain. They had a wonderful place right here! Shengu also had to multiply, and that day...Was THIS day. Shengu woke up at around the ninth hour. Domain woke up too about fifteen minutes later. Shengu stared in a sad way at him. "Are you ok?" Domain said. "I don't know. I don't feel good. My stomach hurts. Everything hurts." Domain was confused again, so he went to Laurie, who was already awake. He was teaching his now grownup offspring to fly with Patunia. "Laurie!" Laurie looked over the edge of the nest. "Shengu is hurting! What do I do?!?" Laurie laughed. "It's not funny!" Domain said, scared. "My, my, Domain! No worries! Shengu is going to give birth!" Domain looked exited and scared. He ran to Shengu to tell her. As soon as he did, Shengu looked green. "I...I...I don't think I'm ready...What do I do? Does it hurt?! Now what!" Domain looked scared. He didn't know! He went to Laurie again.


He just sighed and said "OK, I'll help you with this. I think my family should come too, considering these will be my nephews and nieces. He called up Patunia, and, as a part of bird flying training, the chicks (who were now birds) flew down...Or at least tried! They all entered the den. Shengu smiled when all of them came to comfort her. Laurie came up to her. "Oh my! I believe you'll give birth any minute now!" Shengu didn't look scared or sick this time. She now looked happy. Her family was about to be born! "That's great!" She said. Domain was really confused, since earlier she felt sick and nervous. "Ahh!" She yelled a minute later. "What?!" Laurie said. Shengu was breathing deeply. "Something inside me just broke! Now I feel all wet! And it hurt!" It was Shengu's first time ever giving birth, and Laurie never told her about birth when she was young. "Oh my! Your water just broke!" Laurie said. "What?! I don't have water! And it can't brake!" Shengu said very, very confused. Laurie sighed. "It means something that was holding the pups inside of you just broke. They're coming out an--" "And she's gonna give birth!" Domain yelled. The baby birds (or...uhh...lets just call them kids) were kinda freaked out. They had never seen such a thing! Patunia only smiled. She had laid eggs before, and she knows Shengu won't be disappointed! "So...RIGHT NOW?! I'm gonna give--" "Yes. Now, calm down and breath slowly and fully. Tell me when you need to get them out." Laurie said.


Shengu did so. A hour later, she said "I'm ready!" "Push! Push with all your might now!" she pushed, and she pushed, and pushed more and more and more. Something black-looking came out. When it was half-way out...Whoops! Domain fainted! 'Uh oh' thought Laurie. 'I can't help Shengu give birth and help Domain!' "Patunia! Go wake Domain up!" Laurie said. Patunia did. Shengu screamed "AHHH!!! It hurts! Ahhhhh!!!" "PUSH! PUSH HARDER!!!" She did, and sure enough, the pup came out. Water gushed everywhere. It flowed down to the kids feet. "Ah!" said Joe. He scooted away, and the other kids followed. It reached Domain, and sure enough...He fainted. Laurie just sighed. Shengu rested. She then licked the pup clean. For the rest of the day Shengu gave birth to five beautiful little pups. Domain woke up and Laurie and Patunia went to the nest, but they had trouble getting their kids up! "They're beautiful!" Said Shengu, looking at them, with sparkling eyes. Domain agreed. "There's four girls and one boy!" Yelled Laurie. "Ugh. More girls. Haha!" Domain said. "Hey!" Shengu said, laughing too. They went to sleep, but meanwhile, Angel had not found a mate. He's was crazy. What will come next?!

Chapter 8
Domain woke up to the sound of: "Help! Help!!" Shengu quickly awoke too, and then everyone. DOmain stood up and looked around. Shengu looked scared, and with wide eyes, she thought..."Angel!" Domain looked back at her very quickly, getting scared. He ran out of the den, heading towards the noise.  Shengu said she would come too. "Patunia! Watch my pups!" Patunia nodded in agreement and quickly took to the pups. What Domain found was not just Angel. It was him and a female wolf! "Get him away!" She yelled, with Angel pinning her down. He was crazy, and he had found a female wolf. He was not about to give her up. Domain noticed what he has doing to her. He jumped from the bushes, knocking him down off of her. She was small, redish, and has yellow rings on her fur. She looked wise. Shengu came and nudged her to get up, and the girls ran off to Shengu's den.  Domain got off. Angel was now turning red. He snarled his teeth and growled. Domain, knowing Angel was then crazy, ran quickly off to join the girls on their journey back. Angel just was madder and went to his hunting place. Domain and the girls walked along the path in those woods. "So, what's your name, little girl?" Domain asked. "Haha! I assure you, I look little, but I'm five years old!" Domain and Shengu looked at each other. They were only two years of age! "But you're so...Small!" Shengu said, suprised. "Oh yes. I'm extremely small. But I'm fast and flexible. I had no idea how that wolf caught me. I was just born this way." The full grown wolf said. "That wolf's name is Angel." Domain said. "Oh yes! I never even told you my name! I'm Kastuki." "Well, greetings Katsuki!" Shengu said. On the way there, Katsuki told them many amazing facts, they never knew. "Oh and that's a...Am I bragging? Oh I'm sorry!" She said, guilty of something she didn't do wrong. "It's okay! Wow, you sure are smart!" Shengu said. When they reached Shengu and Domain's home, Katsuki immidiately saw the pups. "Awww!" She said, running to them. "They're so cute!!!" Katsuki loved pups, but she never found the right mate to have any with. "I can tell you like pups" Domian said, smiling. "Oh yes, very much!" She shared more wisdom with them. Laurie was getting jealous. He was always the smart one.

As it neared dark, Shengu thought of something she hadn't thought of since she saw Katsuki. "How did you survive the storm?" Shengu said, nursing her pups. "Oh, well, like I feel bad for, I'm pretty smart. I hid in the cave in that hill." She pointed to the hill they stayed in. "Huh? But we stayed in a cave in that hill. Laurie told us about it." Shengu replied. "Ah, I guess Laurie pretty smart then, but not as smart as me! There's another cave on the other side, a lot more protective. The wind was blowing the opposite way, and I knew the storm was coming, so I ate a lot and brought in the rest so I wouldn't get hungry." Laurie was really jealous then. "What did you guys eat?" Katsuki asked. "We ate the bugs that flew in, since we were facing towards the wind." Domain said. "Ah, well that's pretty smart too!" Katsuki said. "Now, who is this Laurie you speak of?" She asked. "Oh, he's like our doctor, leader to where we are going, and tells us stuff we need to know." Shengu said. "Where is she?" Katsuki said. Laurie got so mad being called a she, he flew into the forest. "It's a he. He's up in that tree." Domain said. "Oh, sorry! Up in a tree? Why?" Katsuki said. "He's a bird." Patunia said. "Like me. He's my mate." Katsuki giggled. She never heard of a bird leading and telling wolves what to do! "Okay, I'll go look." She said, giggling some more. She looked in the tree. All that was there were the kids. "Are any of you Laurie?" Katsuki asked. They all shook they're heads no. She got down. "He isn't in there." Katsuki said. Everyone else looked at each other, then her. "Oh no! He must have been jealous!" Shengu said. "I'll go look for him." Patunia said. Laurie and Patunia were getting old. The average lifespan of a sparrow is a few years to thirteen. Laurie was three. He might only live to be five or six, possibly to eleven, but rare.

Patunia found him. She brought him back. Katsuki came and said sorry. She told him that not only did she have a bigger brain then a sparrow, but that she was older. Laurie understood, but still felt replaced. "So, you like pups?" Shengu asked. "Oh yeah, I love them!" Shengu and Domain looked at each other and smiled. "If you deside to join of group, you could be our doctor, have a high ranking, and as well be our babysitter! Katsuki agreed and they all fell asleep.


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Bump...Wow, so many ppl said they'd see it when it came up...Gosh, I'm hurt ._.

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great job! i kinda skimmed through it, because i had homework andcouldnt post, but itsawesome!

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Watch your grammar, but overall, its a good story.

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